I'd like feedback on my article: Top Ten healthy cheap food lists

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   Shosho91posted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Top Ten healthy cheap food lists (must be signed in to view)

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   DrMark1961posted 5 years ago

   You lost me at "Wellbeing is riches, we as a whole understood it, group it and watch it yet we are confounded about it"
   You really need to find a native English speaker and have them read through your article line by line. There is way too much to comment upon. Until you have improved the English it is not going to be approved and featured.

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      greenmindposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hate to pile on, but I got as far as "We eat poo, working longer hours for reward and the more regrettable thing is we work void stomachs or simply eating chips and chocolates."

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   theraggededgeposted 5 years ago

   Looks like someone thought they could use translation/spinning software.
   
   No go.

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      lobobrandonposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I'm pretty sure this is not from software but self-written. Herd instead of heard was the first clue, plenty more.

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         theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

         Maybe.
         
         What d'you think 'wheat porridge' is? I've never heard/herd of it.
         
         I've just noticed... some of the errors have been corrected. Yesterday Special K was called 'exceptional k' and dark green veg was 'dull green veg'.
         
         There are duplicate paragraphs in it. In fact duplicated three times.
         
         Edit - again: so wheat porridge is a thing. Who knew? I thought porridge was only made from oats.

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            lobobrandonposted 5 years agoin reply to this

            I didn't read through, just the first few sentences, but wheat porridge is probably just porridge made using wheat? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Porridge

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               theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

               Yes. How weird I hadn't heard of it.
               
               All the mentions of 'poo' have been changed to 'crap'. Not much better

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                  lobobrandonposted 5 years agoin reply to this

                  lol.

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   Shosho91posted 5 years ago

   Thanks for your feedback on my article I wish you help me by giving more information about how to make a feature article.

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      DrMark1961posted 5 years agoin reply to this

      I did. Read the post above.
      "You really need to find a native English speaker and have them read through your article line by line. There is way too much to comment upon. Until you have improved the English it is not going to be approved and featured."

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