How to pass QAP?

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   Moondot1822posted 4 years ago

   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give some suggestions  on my article? What can I do to improve? I worked hard, I used different apps to eliminate errors but still the result is the same. Can any of you help me that what to do to get my article published?
   Here is the link, http://hub.me/anCLV

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      CYong74posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, I don't know what's your intention for writing on Hubpages, but I'll say it nonetheless.
      
      We earn from ads. However, the money is only paid out via Paypal. Paypal is not available in Pakistan.
      
      In other words, there's no way for you to earn, if you're writing from Pakistan.
      
      Highlighting this so that you wouldn't waste time getting through the QAP, only to discover you wouldn't earn a cent.

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         Moondot1822posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         First of all, thank you for your time. I was in London last year and I have created a Paypal  account there. I can transfer my money to any bank in Pakistan.
         But that's not my problem right now. I want to publish my article,I would be very grateful if you could help me with this. Read my article and tell me what I need to improve.

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   Yesterday, you were offered advice about image use. You still haven't implemented it. We aren't going to keep telling you the same things so fix that first.
   
   People have had to pay for the unauthorised use of images in the past, so make sure yours come from a legal source and you link to that source and credit the image owner.
   
   There are a few awkward phrases but the grammar's not too bad. The problem is that there are a ton of these articles out there and you are not really saying anything new. Your article may have failed QAP purely because there are so many similar articles on HubPages.

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      Moondot1822posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I am working on it and making my own pictures and I will use them in my article.
      You told me not to share your post on someone else's thread that's why I posted my own thread.
      But sorry if you feel bad.
      Thanks for your time.

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         theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Why would I feel bad? I assure you that I feel fine
         
         I just don't understand why you would ask for feedback before fixing the obvious problems which have already been pointed out.

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            Moondot1822posted 4 years agoin reply to this

            I have never used an article website before so I got confused. I have read many of your articles and it is your kindness that you answer our questions. I want to be successful like you and I am following you. Stay blessed.

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