I'd like feedback on my article: REALITIES OF HUMAN LIFE CYCLE

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   Muhammad Umair Omiposted 5 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: REALITIES OF HUMAN LIFE CYCLE (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 5 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      I know your bio says that you are brilliant at everything and have come to enlighten (and courage) us all, but the article (and your English) is just not up to the professional standard that HubPages requires.
      
      Rather than pointing out all the errors, I suggest you spend some time reading the material in the Learning Center. Click Help, top right, to navigate there.
      
      This article might be helpful to you: https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … tured-Hubs
      
      Good luck.

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   psycheskinnerposted 5 years ago

   What are people meant to learn from this post? Anyone able to read this text knows that people age (and not just male people).

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      Muhammad Umair Omiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for your comment,
      you just have to need, to read carefully, I'm not talking about the age of humans, I'm drawing the attention of everyone towards the negligencies of humans in daily life in different stages of human life.

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         DrMark1961posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         No, I read it carefully, and as well as I was able. If you really want to do well here you need to do several things:
         1. Learn from the learning center, and find out how to add a bio, how to add capsules, and make your article look professional. It does not.
         2. Improve your English. Many of your sentences are hard to follow, at best.
         3. Get your final product edited. You need to find someone that has an even better grasp of English (like a native speaker from the US or the UK) to go over your words and find those thoughts that are hard to understand.
         4. Write something original and helpful.  Just writing a post that makes you feel better might be okay for blogger; check out that site if it is better. If the article you write on here is not original and helpful, you are not going to get much traffic.
         5, That is enough to start. You can delete this or just leave it but as psycheskinner points out, we all know that people age.

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            Muhammad Umair Omiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            I know that I should learn a lot of things but if you are not able to understand the message of my article, that's your problem, not mine.

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               theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

               DrMark's post is not about the message of your article--it's about how to fix it to get it approved. The message is irrelevant if you cannot get it featured.
               
               HubPages has certain requirements. Read the articles in the Learning Center to help you understand them.

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                  Muhammad Umair Omiposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                  Sure Ma'm,
                  I am thankful to you for your kind and precious guidance.

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   Muhammad Umair Omiposted 4 years ago

   Hey,
   
   Thanks for your comment. I have visited the link that you have mentioned in our comment but still, I didn't get the professional standard according to the requirements of Hubpages QAP. Kindly, guide me a little bit further for this.

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      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      The Learning Center is very clear on the proper way to write and format articles to pass QAP.  The problem is your English language skills.  HubPages is an American site with a mainly American audience.  Articles must be written in perfect English.  Work on perfecting your language skills and then come back and try again.

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