I'd like feedback on my article: Climate changes and its impact and...

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  1. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
    Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Climate changes and its impact and consequences of Covid19 (must be signed in to view)

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image53
      Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hi, I agreed with Alicia on all the issues negating your article.       I now refer you to the learning center. Click  HELP on your page or timeline, and learn all that you can to write a good magazine style article on HubPages. Good success!

      1. erorantes profile image59
        erorantesposted 12 months agoin reply to this

        Hello mister Ali. I like the main idea of your article. You are right about what it is happening to the entire world. The last paragraph is a reality. Every country is protecting themselves. Thanks God. I found some grammar and punctuation errors. You need two extra pictures in your article. I like the wheel chart. Good like with your paragraph.

        1. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
          Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

          OK thanks to feedback me, I'll try to do my best as possible, but how I pass my article through quality assessment please suggest me some points ?

          1. theraggededge profile image99
            theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

            Have you read the material in the Learning Center yet? You have to take the advice and apply it to your writing.

            https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … -standards

            1. Miebakagh57 profile image53
              Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

              Ali, the QAP is a fair check on all articles. It check the quality of information in an article. How writers use sentences, punctuations, spellings, and grammar correctly.   We all kearn this in school. Learn more at the learning center.         When all these were taken care of in an article, and depending on how the content is treated, it can pass QAP. Much thanks.

              1. theraggededge profile image99
                theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

                Miebakah, scroll to the top of the page. Click on Chronological. Then you won't reply to the wrong person smile

    2. AliciaC profile image99
      AliciaCposted 12 months ago

      Hi. I’m afraid there are multiple grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation errors in your article. There should be a space after every period (or full stop) and a space after every comma, but there shouldn’t be a space before a comma.

      You have a blank table in the article and a list of terms at the end with no explanation of what the list represents. The last sentence should be eliminated because it contains errors, even though you say it has none.

      The ‘Contact Author” link is present by your profile photo, so there is no need to include your email address in the article.

      There are some other problems in the article (including the fact that the paragraphs are crowded together with no space between them), but I think the first thing you should do is correct the English errors.

      1. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
        Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

        OK man I'll try my best level to enhance my article further more, As It is my first article experience that's why I made some mistakes, hope forthcoming article will be free of mistakes.thanks

        1. Miebakagh57 profile image53
          Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

          Even mistakes happen a second or third time. One rut in electrical engineering make 100 mistakes before success catch up with him. Many thanks.

          1. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
            Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

            Bro please look out my another article.

            1. Miebakagh57 profile image53
              Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

              Hi, do you mean you have make changes in the first article? Or were you talking of a second new article? Thank you.

              1. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
                Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

                I have written second article bro and please guide me how to publish effective article according to this website please guide me

              2. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
                Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

                How how to publish featured article ?

                1. theraggededge profile image99
                  theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

                  Click Help, top right. Then click on the link to the Learning Center. All the guidance you need is there.

                  1. Mohsin Ali darban profile image60
                    Mohsin Ali darbanposted 12 months agoin reply to this

                    OK madam, thanks to guide me. If you don't mind may I keep touch with you please.

                    1. theraggededge profile image99
                      theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

                      You are welcome to ask for help on the forum. Someone will respond.

    3. Miebakagh57 profile image53
      Miebakagh57posted 12 months ago

      Bev, much thanks. Congratulations once more for being a winner in the crafty contest.

      1. theraggededge profile image99
        theraggededgeposted 12 months agoin reply to this

        And thank you for leaving such a lovely comment on the hub. x

        1. Miebakagh57 profile image53
          Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

          Bev, you're welcome.

     
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