I'd like feedback on my article: Climate changes and its impact and...

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   Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Climate changes and its impact and consequences of Covid19 (must be signed in to view)

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      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi, I agreed with Alicia on all the issues negating your article.       I now refer you to the learning center. Click  HELP on your page or timeline, and learn all that you can to write a good magazine style article on HubPages. Good success!

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      erorantesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hello mister Ali. I like the main idea of your article. You are right about what it is happening to the entire world. The last paragraph is a reality. Every country is protecting themselves. Thanks God. I found some grammar and punctuation errors. You need two extra pictures in your article. I like the wheel chart. Good like with your paragraph.

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         Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         OK thanks to feedback me, I'll try to do my best as possible, but how I pass my article through quality assessment please suggest me some points ?

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            theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            Have you read the material in the Learning Center yet? You have to take the advice and apply it to your writing.
            
            https://hubpageshelp.com/standards/Lear … -standards

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               Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

               Ali, the QAP is a fair check on all articles. It check the quality of information in an article. How writers use sentences, punctuations, spellings, and grammar correctly.   We all kearn this in school. Learn more at the learning center.         When all these were taken care of in an article, and depending on how the content is treated, it can pass QAP. Much thanks.

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                  theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                  Miebakah, scroll to the top of the page. Click on Chronological. Then you won't reply to the wrong person

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   Hi. I’m afraid there are multiple grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation errors in your article. There should be a space after every period (or full stop) and a space after every comma, but there shouldn’t be a space before a comma.
   
   You have a blank table in the article and a list of terms at the end with no explanation of what the list represents. The last sentence should be eliminated because it contains errors, even though you say it has none.
   
   The ‘Contact Author” link is present by your profile photo, so there is no need to include your email address in the article.
   
   There are some other problems in the article (including the fact that the paragraphs are crowded together with no space between them), but I think the first thing you should do is correct the English errors.

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      Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      OK man I'll try my best level to enhance my article further more, As It is my first article experience that's why I made some mistakes, hope forthcoming article will be free of mistakes.thanks

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         Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Even mistakes happen a second or third time. One rut in electrical engineering make 100 mistakes before success catch up with him. Many thanks.

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            Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            Bro please look out my another article.

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               Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

               Hi, do you mean you have make changes in the first article? Or were you talking of a second new article? Thank you.

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                  Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                  I have written second article bro and please guide me how to publish effective article according to this website please guide me

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                  Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                  How how to publish featured article ?

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                     theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                     Click Help, top right. Then click on the link to the Learning Center. All the guidance you need is there.

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                        Mohsin Ali darbanposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                        OK madam, thanks to guide me. If you don't mind may I keep touch with you please.

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                           theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

                           You are welcome to ask for help on the forum. Someone will respond.

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                              Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

                              Yes, I will respond. We always do to help new hubbers.

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   Miebakagh57posted 4 years ago

   Bev, much thanks. Congratulations once more for being a winner in the crafty contest.

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      And thank you for leaving such a lovely comment on the hub. x

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         Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Bev, you're welcome.

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