I'd like feedback on my article: Menstrual cycle and it's connection to moon...
Hi there,
Have you used translation software? Because the writing is quite strange. For example, "Chances square measure, at some purpose, you’ve detected that expelling cycles square measure somehow tied to cycles of the moon."
The phrase 'moon square measures' appears several times.
That's not English. You also use 'oscillate' instead of 'cycle'. A pendulum oscillates; women only do it when trying to choose a pair of shoes
FIx your English, then come back and try again.
Edit: I just had a look at your meditation article and it seems most of it has been copy and pasted from other sources. There's a vast difference in quality between the copied material and your own. This is not acceptable practice for any writer.
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