I'd like feedback on my article: The Many Echoes of Christmas

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   Shuan Brownposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: The Many Echoes of Christmas (must be signed in to view)

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      Sherry Hewinsposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I found your account very compelling. As theraggededge has said, this is not really what HubPages is looking for. I don't really know where to send you, but I hope and wish that there is a venue for this story. I hope your story does have a happy ending.

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         Shuan Brownposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   Hi there,
   
   Welcome to HubPages.
   
   Unfortunately this piece is not the kind of article HubPages wants. You have written a personal account, which is essentially a blog post. HubPages prefers articles that help people solve problems, offer information, and are on topics that will be searched for on Google.
   
   Also, there are several grammatical problems and formatting issues.
   
   Click Help, top right to navigate to the Learning Center.
   
   Also read the articles on the network sites to get an idea what kind of articles are acceptable.. Click on the HubPages logo at the top of the page and look for the links down the right-hand side.
   
   Good luck.

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   It is a fascinating account. You could recategorise it as Creative Writing but I suspect it won't garner much traffic.
   
   One of the best places for personal stories is Medium. But you'd need to improve the English.

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   Shuan Brownposted 4 years ago

   Thank. Can you suggeet on how I can make it get a little more traffic

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      It won't attract traffic. It'll just be lost in the trillions of other articles. Traffic doesn't come from within HubPages; it comes via search engines.
      
      The best place for this kind of writing is your own personal blog.
      
      Why not write about the subjects you teach? You could aim for getting students to read your articles.

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         Shuan Brownposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks

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