I'd like feedback on my article: Spectrum of Wealth Generation Ideas

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   MANJUSHREE Biswasposted 3 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Spectrum of Wealth Generation Ideas (must be signed in to view)

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      OldRosesposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      This a saturated topic.  There are literally thousands of similar articles on the internet.  You should talk about your personal experience with some of these ideas.  Talk about why you chose them and how successful or unsuccessful you were and why.

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      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Biswa, my first article ever on hubpages was how to make passive income. Although some of my ideas were similiar as yours, I took a unique angle to treating the topic.                                         Like as the other has said, experience is essential tor supporting the subject. I had all that and it gained good traffic. That as 6 years ago.                                     Seriouly do you think making pasrive income is applicable to the Indian contiinent alone? What about Africa and America, Great Britain and the Orient?                                             Here are other ways to improve the article: remove all the bullet points. Instead insert capsuls to treat those short points as sub-headings or topics. The reason is that bullets are used to list items that needs no explainations.                              Welcome to HubPages. Fine tone your English structure and grammar. Click HELP on your feed and learn more. Add a conclusion and references to the article

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         MANJUSHREE Biswasposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         thank you so much

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   AliciaCposted 3 years ago

   Since you are advising people about their financial situation, it’s very important that you have experience with each strategy that you recommend, as OldRoses says. Personal or professional experience is needed when we write an article encouraging people to invest, lend, or spend money. It’s not enough to give brief warnings about some of the ideas that you’ve shared.

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   Manjushree, though you have presented it nicely, no doubt this is a common subject taken up by the writers at times.
   I am not as experienced as OldRoses or AliciaC but can suggest you that instead of packing so many in one it would be better to elaborate one of them with all the nitty gritty involved and I hope that might attract more people. Keep on writing.

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