I'd like feedback on my article: Advantages of Mobile Phone

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  1. Rohitbagadi profile image59
    Rohitbagadiposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Advantages of Mobile Phone

  2. theraggededge profile image98
    theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi there,

    I'm sorry, but this article is about 30 years out of date. Most of us who use mobile/cell phones have used them for years and know what the advantages are.

    Also, your English is not yet up to the standard required. HubPages is an American site with a global audience. Articles should be written in excellent English. Yours looks like you used spinning software.

    HubPages wants useful, informative articles of around 1,000 words.

    Read the articles on this HubPages' network site to see examples of what is required: https://owlcation.com/

    You can access lots of material at the Learning Center by clicking Help, top right.

    Can I ask you where you found the link to writing at HubPages? We seem to have a whole wave of people from India at the moment. That's a good thing, but you need to explain to them that their English has to be perfect and their articles won't be approved otherwise.

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image42
      Miebakagh57posted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Bev, my worry is why did the editor@hubpages let such thrash to be publish online, specific on hubpages site?                                     I had not come accross such stuff in my more than 7 years online.         Happy new year, Bev.

  3. Rohitbagadi profile image59
    Rohitbagadiposted 2 weeks ago

    I  not know English so much but I try to publish some article , as you know I am from India and here are 22 schedule language and over 200 sub languages  and I am not learn English too much I did my school from Marathi Medium School but I try some English , If there is mistakes , sorry for that but I will improve this English definitely

    1. Miebakagh57 profile image42
      Miebakagh57posted 2 weeks agoin reply to this

      Hi there, Indians can speak and write good English. There's an English tutorial book: Good English Spoken and Written, by an Indian english teach. Buy it and learn good english. Thank you, man.


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