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   Noha Seragposted 4 years ago

   Hey all, I've joined this great community days ago. I'm so glad to publish my first article here and to be featured. Would you give me tips about how to increase my traffic and feedback about my writing style?
   Here is it: https://discover.hubpages.com/relations … Clementine

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      samanthacubbisonposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      A few things:
      
      - Your article has a ton of white space that you should remove (extra space between paragraphs).
      
      - Movie titles should be capitalized properly and in italics, not quotes.
      
      - We recommend removing the stock image at the end that doesn't have much to do with the cotent. Instead, opt for a movie trailer.
      
      - It is a best-practice that H2s should be in APA (https://capitalizemytitle.com/).
      
      - Edit: Also, you should title your article to better reflect that you are analyzing a film.
      
      Hope that helps!

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         Noha Seragposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks ❤️❤️ I tried to remove the spaces between paragraphs but I couldn't.

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            theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            It's simple when you know how
            
            Click the Edit pencil next to the title on your account page: https://hubpages.com/my/hubs/stats
            
            Go to the first text capsule and click on Edit. Place your cursor at the very end of the last character (usually a period/full stop). Press the delete button on your keyboard until the space closes up.
            
            Those blank spaces are caused by too many carriage returns (pressing Enter).
            
            Let us know if you need more help.

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               Noha Seragposted 4 years agoin reply to this

               I did it. I thought she meant spaces between the capsules, not between paragraphs of the text.

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         SmartAndFunposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         What are H2s? Subheadings? Thanks in advance.

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            samanthacubbisonposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            Yep!
            
            

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   theraggededgeposted 4 years ago

   Hi Noha, welcome
   
   It's a good start, I'd say. As it's featured, you don't need help with it. With any luck it will get 'promoted' to the Reelrundown network site. It's a good idea to read the articles there so you know what the editors like: https://reelrundown.com/
   
   Meanwhile, if you haven't already, visit the Learning Center for more tips: https://hubpageshelp.com/ Be sure to check the three subheadings across the top: Making Money, Publishing Standards, & Content Creation.
   
   Good luck.

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      Noha Seragposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you ❤️❤️ I really appreciate your advice.

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   Gyanendra Mocktanposted 4 years ago

   Welcome!!  Noha Serag. theraggeddedge has already given you perfect comment.

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      Noha Seragposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      I take it into consideration, thanks ❤️

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   Ferd Hposted 4 years ago

   It seems like the community has already given you the tips you need. Therefore, a new-ish hubber like myself has got nothing to add.
   
   Anyways, it's a solid first hub imo.

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      Noha Seragposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Yes, I loved their feedback. Thank you ❤️❤️

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