I'd like feedback on my Article: How does a Space Station Works?

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   Jagatheesh Erposted 3 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   My article cleared the quality assessment process of Hubpages. But the niche sites require more improvement. I'd like to hear from fellow hubbers to improve the article.
   Here is the article: https://discover.hubpages.com/education … tion-works

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      AliciaCposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      You've included many interesting facts in your article. I think the main problems are the grammar and capitalization issues.
      
      The title contains a grammatical error. In addition, titles and subtitles should be written in APA-style title case. There are other grammatical errors in the article as well as the omission of required spaces in a few sentences.
      
      Another problem is the photos. I see that you know how to attribute photos correctly because you've done this with the last one. You need to show that the other photos have a suitable license or choose different images that do have a suitable license.
      
      Good luck!

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         Jagatheesh Erposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you! Linda, for your suggestion. I've made some corrections. I'm working on my Grammar and I'll improve the quality of my writing. Thank you again for your valuable feedback.

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      Amara Hassanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Your article is interesting, but as Linda highlighted some issues, you should work on them and then resubmit the article.

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         Jagatheesh Erposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thank You! Amara Hassan, I'm working on the issues.

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   bhattucposted 3 years ago

   Initially if your articles are selected for discover.hubpages.com that itself is a good achievement. Then if your articles are of high quality and in the nature of DIY or on some niche topics then the chances of their shiftung to niche areas increase.

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      Jagatheesh Erposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank You! Umesh Chandra Bhatt, for your suggestion.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 3 years ago

   Title should be "How Does a Space Station Work," not "Works"

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      Jagatheesh Erposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank You! Keith Abt for your suggestion. I've altered the title.

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   Eurofileposted 3 years ago

   The first thing I noticed was the grammatical error in the title, followed by others in the article. It is a shame that these are affecting the appearance and rating of this article, as it contains very good information. When I joined HubPages, I struggled with getting spellings correct in American English. A fellow writer suggested a free download of Grammarly. It also helps with some basic grammar. A paid version offers enhanced grammar support. I have found that the free basic version suits my needs. From experience, I would encourage you to persevere and not get disheartened. It will pay off in the end.

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      Jagatheesh Erposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you! Liz, for your valuable feedback. I've started to use Grammarly. English is not my primary language, so I feel a bit hard in Grammar. I Will improve my grammar and writing skills.

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