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   Syeda Aalaposted 3 years ago

   Please give feedback on my articles.

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      theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Post a link to the article you want feedback on.
      
      Edit: one of your articles is already on WanderWisdom, so congratulations for that.
      
      The other one about barley coffee makes a substantial amount of health claims. You MUST back them up with authoritative references.

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         bravewarriorposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         On a side note, I scanned your article on Pakistan. It certainly is a beautiful country. I had no idea! Did you take the photos featured in your article?

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            Amara Hassanposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Pakistan is a very beautiful country Bravewarrior. I was just thinking to write about this topic but Syedda already did it. :-)

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            Syeda Aalaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Thank You so much....Yeah! the pictures in the article are my own.

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         Syeda Aalaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks! I will add the references.

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      Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Please do give us a link. That wil help us view your write and post relevant feedback.

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         Syeda Aalaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         https://wanderwisdom.com/travel-destina … -be-banned
         https://discover.hubpages.com/health/Barley-Coffee

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            Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Hey Aala, which article among the two you want feedback on?                                      Congratulations for earning a place on WanderWisdom with Pakistan. But you can regularly edit the stuff for minor issues and updates.                                                        It seems that its the barley coffee write that you need feedback. Yes, like as theraggedge said, an authorative nutrition like that needs referencing. Give that at the story end.

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               Syeda Aalaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

               both please

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                  Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

                  Great. Insert them into a text capsul at the end of the conclusion.

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   AliciaCposted 3 years ago

   You should also state the source and license for the photos in your barley coffee article. I see that you've added the source for the first two photos, but you should also show the licence since some Flickr photos can't be used on HubPages. If you have permission to use certain photos or you took them yourself, you should indicate this.

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      Syeda Aalaposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      The pictures for which I have not mentioned the source, are from pexels.com and they say that these are copyright-free......Should I state the source?

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         AliciaCposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Yes, it's a good idea to do this. I do it in my articles so that there's no concern about whether the photos are copyrighted.

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         theraggededgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Yes, with a link back to the photo itself.
         
         More info here: https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … -image-use

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            Miebakagh57posted 3 years agoin reply to this

            Yes, I agree withthe  theraggedge.

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