Dear Friends,
This article is my first attempt at humour in an article. This is not an universally appealing topic as it relates to investments and cryptocurrencies. Please share your critical feedback on the same.
https://letterpile.com/humor/Identifyin … ter-Crypto
I am keeping my fingers crossed.
Thanks and regards,
Mohan
Nice. I don't think you need quite so many disclaimers at the start, though. Trust your readers to see that it's a parody.
Thank you, it is a very pertinent feedback. I will look at ways to trim the introductory sections.
Good piece Mohan. Your HWNs make as much sense as those fungible token things.
It's on Letterpile so you've reached the pinnacle at HubPages, but I have a couple of suggestions.
I would tighten up the first few paragraphs because there's some repetition; get to the HWNs faster.
A careful proofread is needed. I spotted a few errors, e.g. "One of my friend tells me she often hears stories of cryptocurrencies being stolen by hackers and some Government agencies being able to retrieve the same."
Should be "friends" and government is not capitalized.
I am now busy writing the names of vegetables on Post-its. What am I offered for a Post-it with "Rutabaga" written on it?
Thanks for your detailed feedback. I am correcting the glaring error in the article. You are one of my very dependable friends. :-)
Personally, I love the article. Funny but pertinent. Well done.
Thank you, Jodah. Your encouraging words mean a lot.
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