I'd like feedback on my article: Start an Online Business Whith Dropshipping

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   Nour Zahrhposted 19 months ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Start an Online Business Whith Dropshipping

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   Rupert Taylorposted 19 months ago

   I have a couple of suggestions.
   
   You've got a typo in your title - that's never a good idea. It's "With."
   
   Two sentences say the same thing:
   
   "We are going to show you a step (that should be step-by-step) guide on how to start dropshipping from scratch. And how to promote the business with little or no money.
   
   "If you’re interested in getting started with dropshipping, read on for advice on how to do so successfully."
   
   You should kill one of them. Maybe even both, because the preceding sentence leads nicely into the following one.
   
   You recommend using a product searching tool and a free sourcing tool. Readers would probably like to have names for these tools.
   
   Images must be free of copyright restrictions and credited as to source.
   
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      Nour Zahrhposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks a lot.

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   theraggededgeposted 19 months ago

   Are you using an AI content generator?
   
   For instance on your blogging article
   
   "Well, there are actually quite a few ways to make money from blogging or writing. So, if you think you would like to give it a try, head on over to this article to find out how you can earn extra cash!"
   
   Then...
   
   "There are many ways to get paid for writing, but the internet has made it easier than ever before to get started in the field of freelance writing."
   
   That's typical unedited AI output. The clue is in the sentences that say the same thing repeatedly.
   
   You are churning out articles very fast without paying attention to the information in the Learning Center. That's why your hubberscore is so low.
   
   You should not offer advice on financial topics unless you can demonstrate that you yourself are making money from them. It's unprofessional and readers can tell that your material is second-hand. The most obvious thing is that if you are writing on HubPages to make money, then your blogging and investment strategies probably aren't paying a great deal.
   
   And if you are going to use AI then make sure you edit the material properly and add your own input.

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      Nour Zahrhposted 19 months agoin reply to this

      thanks

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   AliciaCposted 19 months ago

   You’ve been given good suggestions for improving your article. In addition, you need to be careful about the overuse of the word “dropshipping”, especially in the first part of the article.
   
   The very short paragraphs look a bit strange. The “g” on its own in the second photo looks odd, and the word is spelled wrong in the fourth photo.
   
   You should demonstrate that you have experience with the dropshipping process yourself in your bio at the start of the article and in the article itself.

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   Nour Zahrhposted 19 months ago

   I am really learning a lot from this feedback, thanks

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