Hi Hubbers,
I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Here is my article: 5 Reasons Why I Help Take Care of Rivers and Streams
Your article contains important facts, but I did notice some problems. You’ve used the word “river” too many times. I know it may be challenging to avoid the word, since the article is about rivers, but you need to try. In the second section, the word is used in every sentence, sometimes more than once. “Rivers and Streams” is in every subtitle. You could try reformatting the subtitles without periods.
Since you’ve written a factual article, references are important. I noticed that you’ve added one, but more are needed. You should also state the source and license of the photos. Consistent spaces between paragraphs should be helpful as well. In some places, it would be good to separate long paragraphs into multiple ones or make a paragraph longer than one sentence.
Ruby,
This has alot of good information, but it seems a bit jumbled.
You've divided into sections, but in each section you need to clearly divide into separate paragraphs.
Like in the last part...start a new paragraph with Personally.
Then also try to keep the information in each section pertinent to what you are explaining in that one.
Maybe show a picture of a graph for a study or some other useful picture.
Put a little bit of your own voice in this article, instead of just facts.
Like in the beginning you told about how you washed clothing in the river.
Thank you very much Alicia and Brenda for your input. I found them very helpful. I really appreciate the time and effort you've spent to give me these replies. Thank you very much.
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