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   AyushChudasama0502posted 15 months ago

   Please give me a feedback for one of my article and also give tips to improve it.

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      theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Give us a link to the article you want feedback for.

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         AyushChudasama0502posted 15 months agoin reply to this

         https://hubpages.com/money/Personal-fin … management

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            AliciaCposted 15 months agoin reply to this

            Hi. I have a few ideas. First, HubPages accepts articles, not blog posts. Next, the bold print in your article is distracting.
            
            Perhaps you could break up the text with more photos. It’s important to state the photographer’s name and the license for each photograph.
            
            I think you should add facts about your financial training to your profile. This is important, because you are advising people what to do with their money.
            
            I also think you should describe how you learned about financial opportunities in the United States when your profile says that you come from India.

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   FatFreddysCatposted 15 months ago

   No.

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      Stephen Tomkinsonposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      How's the hovercraft?

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         FatFreddysCatposted 15 months agoin reply to this

         Full of eels.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 15 months ago

   Break up each section with a photo.
   
   Maybe include a quote.

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   theraggededgeposted 15 months ago

   It's AI text.

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      EricDockettposted 15 months agoin reply to this

      Several of his articles have found their way to niche sites.

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         theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

         I know. I'm not sure about the older ones, but this one is deffo ChatGPT.
         
         Check out, 'It's important to...' and 'It's also important to...' 22 times.
         
         Compare language to forum post.

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            EricDockettposted 15 months agoin reply to this

            I think you're right. I'm just saying I wish HP curators were as observant. That was the intended meaning of my
            
            It won't be long until the sites are flooded with AI-generated content if HP doesn't pay closer attention.

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               theraggededgeposted 15 months agoin reply to this

               Well, given the content of HP's latest newsletter, they clearly think there is value in incorporating AI help. I've been using it for brainstorming ideas and outlines. The results are really interesting.
               
               There are sophisticated AI detectors available now that platforms can use. I put some of my own writing into one and it came out at 90% human

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                  PaulGoodman67posted 15 months agoin reply to this

                  I believe Erik's right that there may problems brewing. Google have made clear their disdain for AI text.
                  
                  At the moment, Google can't detect AI text, but it will likely happen at some point. Sites that have lots of AI material will then get punished.
                  
                  HP editors should be able to spot AI text. HP will need AI detection in the longer run, though.

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