I'd like feedback on my article: Gilgit Baltistan Traditional Pancake Recipe

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  1. Arfanwahab profile image52
    Arfanwahabposted 2 years ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
    Here is my article: Gilgit Baltistan Traditional Pancake Recipe

    1. Khanmaria12 profile image39
      Khanmaria12posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Arfan, here we make pancakes with sugar.
      However, you wrote salt/sugar but forgot to write quantity.

    2. OldRoses profile image67
      OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I believe that there is template for recipe articles that HubPages requires authors to use.  You should spend some time reading the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right corner of your screen) before writing articles on HubPages.  The Learning Center will tell you everything you need to know to be successful on this site.

      1. Arfanwahab profile image52
        Arfanwahabposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Thank you for the response
        I just want to ask a question if you have any solution please help me with this. a few days ago I wrote an article what are the four parenting styles, and luckily my article get published and it remain published for 3 weeks, after 3 weeks I got an email that my article is unpublished. I did some corrections and again published it, now it's been 3 weeks again my article is on pending.

        1. OldRoses profile image67
          OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          You can contact HubPages and ask.  I believe the address is team@hubpages.com.

          1. Arfanwahab profile image52
            Arfanwahabposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            Thank you soo much for the help -

    3. WriterJanis profile image80
      WriterJanisposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You certainly have me craving pancakes at this point. I agree with what other posters have said. Check your grammar and attribute your pictures. Also be sure to specify the amount of each ingredient. If you're hoping to get a high Google rating, then your article should be at least 1,000 words.

      1. theraggededge profile image77
        theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        I think the word count can be less for recipes. Otherwise it will be full of 'fluff'.

        It might be a good idea to add some variations to the basic recipe. To be honest, it looks the same as pancake batter all over the world.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image84
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 years ago

    There are several definite "the" and indefinite "a" articles missing. Try running your text through the free program Grammarly to catch English language errors

  3. AliciaC profile image95
    AliciaCposted 2 years ago

    Hi. It would be better to spread the photos out and state their source. If you didn’t take them, you should also state their license.

    As Rupert has said, there are a few language errors. I also think you need to expand the reason why the pancakes are very healthy and include authoritative references if necessary. In North America (where HubPages is based), fried foods are not always healthy.

    1. Arfanwahab profile image52
      Arfanwahabposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the response AliciaC

  4. Carb Diva profile image80
    Carb Divaposted 2 years ago

    Your article is quite short. Quantities of all ingredients should be specified. The attribution for the photos is missing.

 
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