I'd like feedback on my article: Gilgit Baltistan Traditional Pancake Recipe

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   Arfanwahabposted 2 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Gilgit Baltistan Traditional Pancake Recipe

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      Khanmaria12posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hi Arfan, here we make pancakes with sugar.
      However, you wrote salt/sugar but forgot to write quantity.

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      OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      I believe that there is template for recipe articles that HubPages requires authors to use.  You should spend some time reading the articles in the Learning Center (Help button, upper right corner of your screen) before writing articles on HubPages.  The Learning Center will tell you everything you need to know to be successful on this site.

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         Arfanwahabposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you for the response
         I just want to ask a question if you have any solution please help me with this. a few days ago I wrote an article what are the four parenting styles, and luckily my article get published and it remain published for 3 weeks, after 3 weeks I got an email that my article is unpublished. I did some corrections and again published it, now it's been 3 weeks again my article is on pending.

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            OldRosesposted 2 years agoin reply to this

            You can contact HubPages and ask.  I believe the address is team@hubpages.com.

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               Arfanwahabposted 2 years agoin reply to this

               Thank you soo much for the help -

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      WriterJanisposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      You certainly have me craving pancakes at this point. I agree with what other posters have said. Check your grammar and attribute your pictures. Also be sure to specify the amount of each ingredient. If you're hoping to get a high Google rating, then your article should be at least 1,000 words.

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         theraggededgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

         I think the word count can be less for recipes. Otherwise it will be full of 'fluff'.
         
         It might be a good idea to add some variations to the basic recipe. To be honest, it looks the same as pancake batter all over the world.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 2 years ago

   There are several definite "the" and indefinite "a" articles missing. Try running your text through the free program Grammarly to catch English language errors

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   AliciaCposted 2 years ago

   Hi. It would be better to spread the photos out and state their source. If you didn’t take them, you should also state their license.
   
   As Rupert has said, there are a few language errors. I also think you need to expand the reason why the pancakes are very healthy and include authoritative references if necessary. In North America (where HubPages is based), fried foods are not always healthy.

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      Arfanwahabposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for the response AliciaC

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   Carb Divaposted 2 years ago

   Your article is quite short. Quantities of all ingredients should be specified. The attribution for the photos is missing.

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