Need your guidance to improve my article.

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   Manika Dattaposted 12 months ago

   Hi
   Everyone,
   I am Manika Datta, a new writer on this hub. I  request everyone to read and comment on my article.  Your valuable comments will help to improve my article.
   Thank you

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      Stephen Tomkinsonposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Please post a link to your article, Manika.

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         Manika Dattaposted 12 months agoin reply to this

         Sir
         I am new to HB. And  I don't know how to post the link. Sorry

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            Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

            If you've written an article, and it fall short of expectations, HubPages will send you a mail title,  'Heads- up' with a link.                                   Search your inbox. It'll run like: 'https.hubpages:(x)', where x is your article.                                    Copy, paste, and sent that to us in your thread. That is posting the link. Thanks again.

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      Miebakagh57posted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Like as Stephen kindly requested, please give us a link to read and access your article.                                    Otherwise, we're helpless and can't help you. Much thanks.

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         Manika Dattaposted 12 months agoin reply to this

         Sir
         Thank you for your response.

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      Kenna McHughposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Hi,
      I agree with Rupert.

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         Manika Dattaposted 12 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you

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      Matt Wellsposted 12 months agoin reply to this

      Review the articles on hubpageshelp.com for helpful content creation tips.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 12 months ago

   If the article you need help with is the one about encouragement then the issue I see is that you have written a blog and HubPages is not a blogging platform. HP is looking for magazine-style articles, packed with information, and written in perfect English.
   
   Check out the Learning Center. Follow the link at "Help" top right.

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   Manika Dattaposted 12 months ago

   Sir,
   Thank you so much for your reply. I will work on it.

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   AliciaCposted 12 months ago

   As Rupert says, you need to make sure that the article appeals to a wide audience  I think you could do this. Helping students with problems is very important, no matter what country we are teaching in.
   
   You also need to be very careful about English errors. Unfortunately, there are two errors at the start of the article that may stop people from reading further. One is that the caption under the photo is incomplete and another is that the date in the title of the first text capsule is wrong.

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   Manika Dattaposted 12 months ago

   Hi
   Thank you so much for your precious advice. I will work on it.

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   Manika Dattaposted 12 months ago

   Thank you so much for your response. Sir, I did not receive any mail.
   Thanks

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   Manika Dattaposted 12 months ago

   Thank you

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