I'd like feedback on my article: 7 Best, Cutest and the Most Romantic

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   Arensshiposted 18 months ago

   Hi every one! I would like to improve my article to be featured in reelrundown. Can you please give me feedback? Thank you!
   
   Link:https://discover.hubpages.com/entertainment/Best-Cutest-and-the-Most-Romantic-Chinese-Dramas

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      Khanmaria12posted 18 months agoin reply to this

      I am unable to open the link

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         Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         https://discover.hubpages.com/entertain … ese-Dramas

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            Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

            Hi. Maybe, I accidentally put space on the link. Sorry! And thank you for your feedback!

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      Miebakagh57posted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Re-move the dash (-) in the title. It makes the heading exceeds 10 characters.                                 Second, learn how to properly treat a link so that when other writers and readers click on it, it open for their benefits.                                    Sorry, the link not well formatted prevent me to read your story.

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         Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         https://discover.hubpages.com/entertain … ese-Dramas
         
         Hi. Maybe, I accidentally put space on the link. Sorry! And thank you for your feedback!

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      CYong74posted 18 months agoin reply to this

      You just published this, didn't you? Wait a while to see whether it gets shortlisted for tranfer. You might not need to do much of anything else
      
      (I took a look and there are some grammar errors.)

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         Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         Yes. Thank you. Grammar is really my weakness and it's a little bit difficult to correct them myself.

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            CYong74posted 18 months agoin reply to this

            It's more of sentence structure issues, rather than agreement.
            
            Your url is fine, btw, putting dashes between words is preferable to spaces. But there is no need for caps and stop words like "and" and "the".

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               Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

               Thank you!

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      WriterJanisposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      Your article was an interesting read. Although most articles are published and in some cases featured pretty quickly, it can take time before they are moved to a niche site.
      As already mentioned by Alicia, your first video doesn't work. I suggest you credit the picture you have at the beginning of the article. Also, movie titles should be italicized. Hope this helps.

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         Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

         Thank you! I will look into it.

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   AliciaCposted 18 months ago

   I’ve looked on two devices and get the same result for your first video (the “Falling Into Your Smile” one). The message says “Video unavailable.” It doesn’t say that the video is unavailable only in my country.

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      Arensshiposted 18 months agoin reply to this

      I see. Thank you very much for the feedback. I will change the first video.

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