I'd like feedback on my article: Expected Goals: The Story of how Data...

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  1. stereomike83 profile image78
    stereomike83posted 24 months ago

    Any suggestions on how I could make this not keep getting flagged as spammy? I removed the amazon capsule, rewrote it a couple of times and yet everything it comes back as spammy
    Here is my article: Expected Goals: The Story of how Data Conquered Football and Changed the Game Forever

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  2. theraggededge profile image83
    theraggededgeposted 24 months ago

    I think you should add an introduction explaining that you are reviewing a book because it's not clear. Also, a quick note to say you are referring to soccer, as 'football' is entirely different in the US.

    As a review, you should mention what is addressed in the book - you can refer to the book's chapters for that. If need be, read other in depth book reviews to get a better idea how to structure it.

    You need at least 1,000 words.

    Add an inline link to Amazon.

    Hope that helps.

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    1. stereomike83 profile image78
      stereomike83posted 24 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks for the feedback. I'll have a look at making some of those changes and see if I can get it passed

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  3. AliciaC profile image94
    AliciaCposted 24 months ago

    I think you may need to change the title or the text of the article. You say in the title that data has conquered football and changed the game forever. You say in the text that there is still progress to be made before football can be truly conquered by data.

    Another way of doing this would be to point out the inaccuracy of the book title in the first section of the article or to make it more obvious that you are reviewing a book in the title.

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    1. stereomike83 profile image78
      stereomike83posted 24 months agoin reply to this

      Thanks, have changed the title now to be clear this is a book review so fingers crossed I can get it past the featured checks!!

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