I'd like feedback on my article: Be Aware of These 5 Data Center Trends in 2020

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   ctrlsposted 4 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Be Aware of These 5 Data Center Trends in 2020 (must be signed in to view)

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Hi there,
      
      You can't promote your own website.
      
      Remove the links to Forbes. You article needs to stand alone and HubPages doesn't want you to send readers off the page. If you need to cite references, put them at the end of the article.
      
      Good luck.

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      Miebakagh57posted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Great that you have remove the links and place them as references.                                         Seriously, your article equally looks great. Nevertheless, there are certain English words/structures that I reason needs correcting. For example the word 'fastly' needs to be repiaced best with rapidly. As data center is a house where data is stored, it can not be at the speed of light, which time it took light to travel from a galaxy to the earth, which is trillions of miles away! Such issues can  impedes the quality of an/the article.                    Have you google 'data center' and see SEO result? HubPages is rapidly moving away from general topic articles to niche articles. Perhaps you can make a slight modification? Like discussing trends on  AIRTEL or MTN as a data center? Thank you.

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   ctrlsposted 4 years ago

   Hi theraggededge
   
   Applied the suggestions you recommended. Still not yet cleared quality Assessment Process.
   
   Can u please review and help with that.
   
   Thanks.

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   I noticed some problems. Subtitles shouldn't be followed by a colon. You say in one place that "by 2020, we are going to produce 1.7Mb data per second." We are near the last quarter of 2020, so perhaps you could update this statement.
   
   Another thing that I noticed was the overuse of the word "data." I know how difficult it can sometimes be to reduce the use of a word when the topic of the article is the same as that word, but you need to try.

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   Kenna McHughposted 4 years ago

   You have some plagiarism flags of about five percent, most of them are at the beginning of your paragraphs. Also, the grammar needs to be fixed.  Try using the link capsule for references; it looks better and is easier to read.

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