I'd like feedback on my article: Have You Ever Thought About Creating Ebooks on.

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   Eileen Hughesposted 7 weeks ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: Have You Ever Thought About Creating Ebooks on Amazon

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      Kenna McHughposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      It's on Discover, which has ads. So, that is good. Or what's the problem?

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   Eileen Hughesposted 7 weeks ago

   Hubpages says it's spammy but no links on there so what's against being featured please

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      Kenna McHughposted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

      Well, I hear you. But it's on Discover, so it's been featured.

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         Miebakagh57posted 7 weeks agoin reply to this

         Does any stuff on  Discover now really mean a feature article?

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   Eileen Hughesposted 7 weeks ago

   I just checked and it isn't and hubpages said put on here

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   Shesabutterflyposted 7 weeks ago

   I saw your article under the commercial and creative writing category on Discover. It was second from the top. It's currently featured, however could be unfeatured do to quality/spam in the near future.
   
   There are quite a few grammatical errors, and sentences that need restructuring. Your article reads more along the lines of a bullet list. I think it would benefit from more information. You also need an introductory and closing paragraph.
   
   Typically HP requires your personal experience before promoting an Amazon link. That might be part of the problem for triggering a spammy notification. You don't explain why we should buy that specific book, or how it helped you in the journey to creating and publishing ebooks.

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   Eileen Hughesposted 7 weeks ago

   Thank  you so much for that. sometie we just write and dont see the mistakes. thanks again for taking the tie to do that.

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   theraggededgeposted 7 weeks ago

   Your quiz asks two questions - so they need question marks. To be honest, the quiz is unnecessary because no one can answer the questions, given that there is no way to comment. Is there still a quiz module? If so, use that.
   
   Also, HubPages should be capitalised

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   Eileen Hughesposted 7 weeks ago

   Thank you for your help

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   psycheskinnerposted 7 weeks ago

   The amazon as is spammy because you don't describe using that book.

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   Eileen Hughesposted 7 weeks ago

   Gee I just used that as a photo .I didn't even think of it as ad. But yes now I agree I suppose it is my one so it is advertising. Thank you for your help

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    psycheskinnerposted 7 weeks ago

    I meant the "buy now" link at the bottom to how to write a book on amazon -- the "spammy' warning is almost always about live links to products

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