http://hubpages.com/hub/Excessive-sweat … groin-area . I am asking for feed back on this hub as am not sure what is wrong or what I could do better.
Words like 'treatment' or 'Chinese medicine' are not keywords.
I would use 'hyperhidrosis treatment,' 'sweaty groin,' in addition to the existing ones. Section titles should also contain keywords. Also, why is the comment form in the midst of the hub?
But it's a good, useful hub anyway. Maybe others can advise better.
The hub is good...very informative. There are some really long sentences and I had to go back and re-read so maybe you could shorten them up. Also, like Haunty said, the comments is in the middle of the hub. Nice work though
The information is good but the English is curiously contorted. Is English not your first language, or is this article "spun" from another source?
I think your hub has a lot going for it. I like to mix in a greater variety of capsules, ie. video, poll, or links.
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