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Not sure what's wrong

  1. networkrecruiting profile image60
    networkrecruitingposted 8 years ago

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Excessive-sweat … groin-area . I am asking for feed back on this hub as  am not sure what is wrong or what I could do better.
    Thank you,

  2. Haunty profile image81
    Hauntyposted 8 years ago

    Words like 'treatment' or 'Chinese medicine' are not keywords.
    I would use 'hyperhidrosis treatment,' 'sweaty groin,' in addition to the existing ones. Section titles should also contain keywords. Also, why is the comment form in the midst of the hub?

    But it's a good, useful hub anyway. Maybe others can advise better.

  3. ChristinaScibona profile image76
    ChristinaScibonaposted 8 years ago

    The hub is good...very informative.  There are some really long sentences and I had to go back and re-read so maybe you could shorten them up.  Also, like Haunty said, the comments is in the middle of the hub.  Nice work though

  4. networkrecruiting profile image60
    networkrecruitingposted 8 years ago

    Thank  you thank you...appreciate it.

  5. Marisa Wright profile image97
    Marisa Wrightposted 8 years ago

    The information is good but the English is curiously contorted.  Is English not your first language, or is this article "spun" from another source?

  6. KeithTax profile image74
    KeithTaxposted 8 years ago

    I think your hub has a lot going for it. I like to mix in a greater variety of capsules, ie. video, poll, or links.