Please critique my brand new hub, I spent time on research.

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   brakel2posted 14 years ago

   http://hubpages.com/hub/Gifted-Child-Ho … -Help?done
   
   Give me some feedback. I need to add some more pictures and a video. Was  my research worth it? Thanks so much.

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   saleheensblogposted 14 years ago

   ~ split the text into more capsules so that you you leave place for more ads
   ~ don't add photo beside your first paragraph, that is the place Google places a tons of ads
   ~ you need to work on your keywords,a single word keyword don't helps a lot, use more pointed phrases.
   ~ you could use a rss feed to keep the readers aware of your other hubs.
   ~ you can use a news feed beneath your comment capsules
   ~ you could use an amazon capsule as well.
   it was a nice hub. thnx

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      brakel2posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you for all the suggestions. Could you tell me how to do the news feed and RSS I have read hubs about them, but I do not understand the concepts. Maybe I need to read it over until I get it. Do you just do copy and paste to a hub capsule from the profile page feed?

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         saleheensblogposted 14 years agoin reply to this

         add a rss capsule then paste the url for your hot,latest or best hubs,the url for you will be
         http://hubpages.com/author/brakel2/latest/?rss
         ot
         http://hubpages.com/author/brakel2/best/?rss
         or
         http://hubpages.com/author/brakel2/hot/?rss

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            brakel2posted 14 years agoin reply to this

            Hi- Tnank you for all your suggestions. I did the RSS feeds, and I fixed my keywords. I read an article that google is promoting more one word keywords, but I do not understand it. Anyway, I will stick mostly to more than one. I still need to work on my newsfeed. and move my photos a little away from the start of my hub. Your instructions were easy to follow. Thanks again. You helped me so much.

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   saleheensblogposted 14 years ago

   you can use rss more specifically for certain tags rather than only your hubs.
   if you click on any tag it will take you to a page where all the hubs under the tag is listed.if you click on the tag of parenting it will take you to a page where all parenting hubs are listed
   you can see the url of the page in the browser tool bar.it looks like http://hubpages.com/tag/parenting/hot
   now just add /?rss after it to prepare a custom rss on te topic.

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   saleheensblogposted 14 years ago

   read this hub for more detail http://hubpages.com/_1xi1g1a8xrx3z/hub/ … -RSS-Feeds

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   lrohnerposted 14 years ago

   I think you've done some great research, and it does show in your hub. It was really interesting to read.
   
   I would make one minor change, though.
   
   Read this sentence again: "Occasionally, a child is born gifted with a brain, so different from others in its structure that it is like a wired engine."
   
   Take out the comma after "brain." At first, I read it as "A child is born gifted with a brain." and I was wondering if you had lost your mind.
   
   I really, really enjoyed reading your hub. Nice.

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      brakel2posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks for reading my hub and for telling me to fix my brain  mistake and for complimenting my hub.. That was really funny about the brain. You are a very helpful person!!!

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