New Hubber, ready to be slaughtered!

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  1. Simone N profile image60
    Simone Nposted 8 years ago

    Hi all,
    I am new and just finished my first Hub. I am sure it is riddles with problems so I figured I'd put myself out here.
    Thanks in advance for any feedback smile

  2. WryLilt profile image90
    WryLiltposted 8 years ago

    For a first hub it's an absolutely wonderful job.

    You've done everything right in the areas most newbies stuff up:
    -Enough text for top right advert.
    -Great length.
    -Not personal or blog post type content.
    -Overdone topics (such as 'how to make money online' or 'buy a kindle').

    All I can say is:
    Sign up for amazon and put some pink cameras in amazon capsules so you earn commission if a visitor clicks.

    Maybe move down the text about the origin of pink - It's good for word count and background but visitors will probably be interested in pink cameras NOT why they are pink. Another idea is to right align that text block and make it grey or blue, so it appears as an extra to the rest of the hub.

    If you continue to write to this level and with this quality I am very sure you'll do well on hubpages.

    1. skyfire profile image72
      skyfireposted 8 years agoin reply to this


      Change first image with camera(pick something like pink flip mino HD)

  3. Ginger Meow profile image78
    Ginger Meowposted 8 years ago

    I am sure you will do okay.

  4. Cagsil profile image81
    Cagsilposted 8 years ago

    I have reviewed your hub and have only one suggestion.

    Your second text capsule, keep the first two paragraphs. Insert another text capsule and put the third and fourth paragraphs into it.

    The ad that is after your second capsule is too far down your hub. By cutting your second capsule into two, the ad will move up toward the top of the hub. It will display after your second capsule, but because you have so much text in the second capsule, you have pushed it further down the hub.

    I hope that helped. Otherwise, good job. And, do become an affiliate of Amazon and display some earn commission.

  5. Simone N profile image60
    Simone Nposted 8 years ago

    thank WryLit and Ginger Meow - clever names you two!
    @ WryLit - thank you for the very specific suggestions! I will take advantage of them.

  6. Simone N profile image60
    Simone Nposted 8 years ago

    thanks Cagsil!most excellent suggestion : )

    1. Cagsil profile image81
      Cagsilposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      You're welcome. smile

  7. earnestshub profile image86
    earnestshubposted 8 years ago

    Hi Simone. You dun good! smile It is nice to see you got good help.

    I agree with all that has been suggested by these fine hubbers. smile

  8. Simone N profile image60
    Simone Nposted 8 years ago

    thanks earnesthub smile
    I appreciate all the help and support - so soon too!

  9. Simone N profile image60
    Simone Nposted 8 years ago

    thanks skyfire - great idea.
    I can hardly keep up with you guys!


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