I liked this hub and found it useful, you need to double check your spelling and grammar in places though. Also upload a profile photo/picture as soon as you can. I'm always suspicious of hubbers without an avatar!
Love it. voted useful and commented and saved it for future use.
No changes, oh I agree w/ sarahsherlock on the avatar thing.
Keep publishing and you'll be on your way
Your hub is clear, although I would add more content - perhaps a bit of narrative added to the pros & cons sections. Some larger images might brighten it up a bit - photos of fruit and vegetables (the Flickr creative commons section is a good place to find photos you can use).
Hello Sarah and Starfishfelix
I will get straight onto improving my spelling and grammar. I definitly agree with you about it needing some colour and brightening up, thanks for the advice on were to get pictures from. And I'm definitly going to add more content and go into more depth about the products.
Thanks for the help fellow hubbers and if you need anything from me just ask.
Welcome to HubPages!
I've reviewed your hub and have the following suggestion.
(a) Increase your content.
(b) Add photos to bring life to your hub.
(c) Increase your keywords/tags, the average hub should have at minimum 9-15 keywords/tags people will use to search for your hub with.
(d) Use Amazon not only as a sales tool, but accessories as well.
You have a good topic to work with.
I hope that helps.
I liked the hub a lot. I think you did a good job. Your recipes need a little work....a handful of berries added to a 100g of yogurt seems too generic. What if I have huge hands or very small hands? Maybe something like 1/2 cup more or less to taste? Your measurements are a little strange in a couple of places, it took me quite a while to figure this one out: 1-11/2 inch slice cucumber. Those should be made clearer.
I can only agree with what is posted before I entered this thread.
Main point of agreement - lose the "hatman" avatar in a hurry... or else build up a really scary shadow person persona, start writing about ghosts and the paranormal - and really let lose with the "scary"
Thanks for all the help, I'm glad people enjoyed the hub and found it usefull and all the improvments that you all suggested are on there way.
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