Critique my hub Please!

  1. Diane Inside profile image80
    Diane Insideposted 7 years ago

    This is a fairly new hub, a recipe, but I don't have many recipe hubs and so far they don't get alot of views. So I thought, maybe you guys could let me know how this one is.


    What can I do different, what about the tags and stuff like that.

    Thanks.

    http://hubpages.com/hub/Homemade-Chicke … ommon-Cold

  2. Starfishfelix profile image61
    Starfishfelixposted 7 years ago

    Its a nice hub, concise and the recipe is clear.  Some of the writing is a little bit choppy - one thing that I find helps is to read what you wrote out loud to see how it flows.

    I would also change the first image - the copyright watermarks are somewhat distracting.  A good place for images is the Flickr commons - the images are released under the Creative Commons license, and can be used (with some restrictions depending on the specific license).

    1. Diane Inside profile image80
      Diane Insideposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thanks Starfishfelix, I understand what you mean, and I will do that. Thanks a bunch.

 
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