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Would love some feedback!

  1. EmmetRogers profile image61
    EmmetRogersposted 6 years ago
    1. kschang profile image87
      kschangposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      What exactly is the PURPOSE of "The Sports Fan Understood"? What point are you trying to make?

      That everyone should believe in a cause of some sort?

      That sports fans are misunderstood?

      What?

      1. EmmetRogers profile image61
        EmmetRogersposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        I knew it was pretty poor writing, and looking back, it has no direct purpose. What would you suggest, delete? Thanks for the honest opinion!

        1. kschang profile image87
          kschangposted 6 years agoin reply to this

          Only YOU would know what's the purpose of this hub. Unless you intended it as short fiction or poetry...

  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 6 years ago

    Welcome to HubPages smile I read your article about Improving your free shooting. I found your article very well written big_smile only thing I can suggest is that your picture get moved off to the right and maybe center your poll. You can add links from other sites you feel would be additional support, a video too. Take a look at other Hubs and see how you can add to yours wink great job!

  3. EmmetRogers profile image61
    EmmetRogersposted 6 years ago

    Thank you soo much! I really appreciate the review!! big_smile I will definitely take your suggestions and apply them smile Thanks again!

 
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