Need your feed back asap on my first post!!

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  1. jpastor profile image61
    jpastorposted 6 years ago

    Need your feed back asap on my first post!!  My hub looks bland what can I add to make it stand on out.  Is my hub informative enough?

    Looking for tips and strategies to improve it.  Thanks!

    1. Dale Hyde profile image86
      Dale Hydeposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      I will be honest. Your hub is just an advertisement, and not worthy of my input. Call me rude or whatever, but I simply get tired of reviewing such hubs, and you manipulated me, with this post in the forum, to click on your hub. I do not appreciate that.

      1. jpastor profile image61
        jpastorposted 6 years agoin reply to this

        I'm actually writing about a company if you can't review its then that's totally up to you and you've been manipulated by others, not my problem.  Not here to manipulate.  When commenting please stick to the topic and not advertise your personal issue.  Create a new thread for that some where else.

    2. kschang profile image87
      kschangposted 6 years agoin reply to this

      So *you* are jpastor... I was wondering about who put that that video as I wrote a hub on what exactly *is* wazzub. smile

      But put that aside for the moment:

      Strictly speaking of your hub, with NO external input or reference other than some healthy skepticism: your hub is useless. You have vague comparisons, touting what they thought to be virtues but none of the problems and vagueries. It sounds like you presented their marketing speech as if it is true with NO attempt at verification.

      In fact, your words are self-conflicting. First you said this is a "multi-billion dollar project", then later you wrote "over 2,000,000 dollars have been..." Did we lose a couple zeroes somewhere? (probably just a typo on your part, but still...)

      You don't have a review. What you got doesn't even really talk about building referral chains except "recruit people and [maybe] make money".

      In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if someone flagged your hub as "overly promotional" by now. (Not me though)


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