I'd like feedback on my article: One thing that makes you successful.

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   Mr EAAposted 7 years ago

   Hi Hubbers,
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article One thing that makes you successful. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      Ivan Hernandezposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Try using the appropriate images, but you need to source it. Rupert is right. Those  images look way too copyrighted to be normal images. I suggest using Pixabay. It's free, and they have an unlimited license, so it's not copyrighted. It's free images. I use it for just about anything. If I want to use copyrighted images, I must first ask permission.  If that images is from another website, then link that image to another website. That's my advice to you.
      
      Listen to what Rupert said. Your article has potential, but use that potential to fix that article. go fix that article, please.

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         Mr EAAposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Thanks for the help

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      What everybody else said, plus:
      
      Your title does not match your content
      Google is not a good source for photos unless you research them and find those that have licenses that permit you to use them
      Your article is way too short
      
      You are brand new here and obviously have not taken the time to read the info in the learning center about how to write  a stellar article.
      
      Click on "help" in the upper right hand corner and scroll down to find the learning center.  Lots of good info there that you need to know.
      
      Take the time to read articles by successful writers here to see how they set theirs up.  Then get to work. 
      
      You can't just throw something together and expect it to do well.  If you want to write here, you have to be patient and hone your skills.  It sometimes takes years  to do well, but the learning and growth are well worth your time and effort.
      
      Good luck.

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         Ivan Hernandezposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         Yeah. It took me almost a year of writing on HubPages to hone my skills in, and my skills weren't even half bad when they started.
         
         For foreign users, it takes almost 4 years to write a decent article. It took me almost a year to write a Niche site article.
         
         Niche site articles are just another term we use to describe articles that have been written so excellently that they deserve to be moved to a vertical site. I have eight right now.

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   Rupert Taylorposted 7 years ago

   Your headline and sub-heads need to be in Title Face
   
   Your punctuation is a problem. There is always a space after a punctuation mark.
   
   There are numerous grammar issues. You should never use a lower case i for the personal pronoun, and words such as gotta don't belong in properly written articles.
   
   Also, you can't just lift images from the Internet without permission. You could be sued for copyright infringement.

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      Ivan Hernandezposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Rupert. I see that you have a 100 on your HubberScore. Congrats.

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      Mr EAAposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you

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   Ivan Hernandezposted 7 years ago

   Your article has potential, but it has punctuation errors and spelling errors. I skimmed the top portion of your article. Fix your grammar and your punctuation and spelling. Also, that sentence I just read was a run-on sentence, something that's not accepted in HubPages. I know that you're new, so I'll leave the help to the experts, ok. Basically, I've written some bad hubs in the beginning, but it takes years to master the art of writing. I began writing when I was 11. It was a story, titled "March 18." It had very many grammatical errors. Even at 15, I struggled to improve in English and Writing. In fact, Five-Paragraph Essays were the hardest to write for me. I couldn't write anywhere close to 700 words at that time. Now, I write over 1500 at times because that is the recommended minimum on HubPages. At first, I struggled. Then, I found my niche this year. I'm not saying that you don't have potential. I'm just saying that you have a lot to learn. Your article has some potential. Now, you need to work on hat article for it to show some true potential.

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   theraggededgeposted 7 years ago

   "You must be thinking what kinda bullshit am i reading we all know ourselves blah blah but no! most of us don't know ourselves majority of us don't know where their lives are going and what to do with their lives in order to be successful."
   
   I definitely was thinking that

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      TIMETRAVELER2posted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Huh??

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         theraggededgeposted 7 years agoin reply to this

         That quote was from the article.

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   Ivan Hernandezposted 7 years ago

   I don't want to publicly destroy you and your article and risk another ban, so I'll just make it quick. You need a lot of help with that article. You've made no effort to improve it. I told you to try using Pixabay, yet you kept the article the way it was. 100,000$ should be $100,000, and source the google images.
   
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   I know that your article is not featured yet. If you spend time on these links, then you'll reach success. I don't want to comment much further because I'm not in a good mood. I just got off the worst Christmas ever. Please, improve your article. listen to your helpers. And please, modify your article. modify it. Read the links that I gave you. Don't just skim through it. read the whole thing.
   
   It also helps to read other's articles. That way, you'll get a good sense of what other people are writing. Please don't read articles comparable to yours. Instead, read articles that have length. I invite you to read one of theraggededge's articles.

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