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Starting Today -- A Short Story

Updated on September 19, 2014



6 A.M.

Mandy O' Brian, 25, finally managed to park her Citroen C3 convertible on terminal 5, at London Heathrow Airport.

The sun is barely fighting his way up against early clouds. Is past 6a.m., taxis and minicabs come and go with their noises and passengers.

Her own view -- She opens up her car trunk and takes her carry-on luggage. Suddenly she hears the alarm on her cellphone. "Darn it! I set the alarm for 4 a.m. and now it sounded off again."

Mandy works for a well known Airline Company as a flight hostess. She showed up for work on a regular flight bound for John F. Kennedy. Her uniform gives her some chic status. Her looks and glamorous red hair add a natural beauty.

On her way to the the terminal, Nicole Pitman, 23, from Bristol UK, Joins her with her purple and pink luggage -- Nicole has been on the job for about 3 weeks or so.

Both pass the Security screening and meet the rest of the crew, especially Captain Steve Mcpherson, a veteran from Desert Storm. "Good to see you again girls!" says Mcpherson who was born in Devon UK -- even though he is 52, he still keeps himself in shape and a positive attitude. Seconds later joins him flight engineer Pete Mc Collough, who has been flying for over 21 years. He was at RAF for 13 years and decided to go into civil life after he got married.

The flight attendants POV --The last passenger shows up through the boarding tunnel. He just heard his name on the speakers and barely made it to the boarding counter.



Nicole and Mandy are greeting the passengers and making sure they get seated quickly. Overhead luggage compartments are being sealed quickly, A passenger comes into the aircraft running, dropping his glasses and acting awkwardly.

"Oh god! ma'am,I left home on time but this taxi driver got lost...I'm very sorry for showing up like a maniac, " he says, cleaning up his glasses unconsciously. "Not a problem sir, we knew you were missing, and we waited a little longer," replies Mandy as Nicole watches.

"The door has been shut," says a voice through a speaker, "This is your Captain speaking, Tower control has authorized our take off, please fasten your seat belts, turn off all cellphones and enjoy the flight, crew preparing for take off."


"Finally folks, we have reached an altitude of 36,000 feet huh, you can use our restrooms accordingly...we will be arriving in approximately five hours if everything goes right as scheduled. New York weather conditions, 79 degrees, clear skies, and 80% humidity. Thanks for flying with us."

Mandy and Nicole get ready to push the meal cart. "Hot plates on this side, and beverages on the other side of the cart," Explains Mandy to her rookie partner. Suddenly, the plane hits a bump..

"crew, please get seated," says the flight engineer with a well trained calmed voice. "That's the sign of a serious weather condition, and we don't want passengers to panic, " says Mandy in a cool mood too. "Wow!" a sensation of an small bump... then an slight diving. The plane is fighting the turbulence trying to keep the nose straight ahead.

An old man, starts to throw up on a paper bag. Ladies start praying in desperate move. Tough guys even sweat cold.

A calm...then again,

Then again, seems that the plane was pushed aside trying to avoid the heart of the turbulence.


"Just keep it on 500 steady, full throttle Steve!!"

McPherson answers fearing the worst, "Full power now Pete...shit!, we lost thrust"

"we are stalling, stalling!!" screams Captain McPherson.

"I know, I know! We are going down....mayday, mayday. Early bird 322, over!"

Then a sharp dive... inside the pressure falls, oxygen masks fall on the passengers. The biggest scream from a crowd is heard...the upper section is about to break up, the fuselage is feeling the forces of nature...belongings fly all over. Some passengers get thrown to the back and hit the meal carts...

The plane keeps going down like a roller coaster with no end; breathing gets harder.

Finally the Captain's voice is heard: "Ladies and gentlemen, hold on tight... we are trying to avoid a disaster, we are almost getting this thing under control....just...If we make it, starting tomorrow..."



Mandy's alarm clock wakes her up. She is in tears, realizing that she had a nightmare. She gets a phone call, is Nicole. "The airline canceled our flight due to extreme weather conditions on the Atlantic ocean," says Nicole. "The airline company was trying to reach you Mandy, are you okay?"

"Just fine Nicole. This headache,,,! Went to bed late and took two pills for these selfish cramps, you know? I think I'm gonna start my period soon. Well, I don't want you to hear all my personal stuff..."

"Don't worry. Maybe I should come to spend sometime with you, " nods Nicole.

"Great! We can drive around Trafalgar Plaza and I can show you where I met Phil, oh Gosh!"

"Then see you at 11PM, if that is alright with you? asks Nicole.

"Perfect, getting in the shower right now and fixing my smoothie"

"Talk to you later!"

"bye, Nicole!"


Mandy happens to turn on the TV for a second and there it is...

breaking news:

"Flight 366 from New York to London, has just disappeared on the Atlantic ocean 600 miles from Nova Scotia. Captain Steve McPherson a 52 years old war veteran... and his Copilot Peter Mccullough, from Cardiff are among the crew members that supposedly are missing. This is breaking news! We are trying to get the list of passengers...."

Mandy sits on the Couch and cries like a young girl... holding her tummy and weeping non stop. "Could've been me...I cannot believe it...! maybe this nightmare was meant to be a warning... Oh my...! Starting tomorrow I will change and get my life together. I can imagine how Nicole is feeling right now... Oh my Lord!"

Her cellphone rings again.




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  • Admiral_Joraxx profile image

    Admiral_Joraxx 6 years ago from Philippines

    This really happens sometimes. An uncle of mine was also saved from an ill fated voyage by such premonitions. It's kinda unexplainable but thanks God. Great post lord! Very nice, i voted up and awesome.=)

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    saddlerider1 6 years ago

    I use to love flying and spent a lot of time in the air. Now I would rather bus, car or train it. Somehow I feel safer on the ground. Yet I know air travel is by far still the safest, fastest and most reliable form of transportation. But when you hear or read of stories like this one, it puts the fear of flying right back in ya. You took my breath away, I felt like I was sitting in that plane going down. Awful feeling of panic and chaos. Beautifully written, well done. Bravo.

  • Lord De Cross profile image

    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    WOW! HEAR Me,

    Thanks for stopping by. Glad to hear from you again!'LORD

  • Hear Me profile image

    Hear Me 6 years ago from Somewhere in Florida

    Wow...very haunting.

  • Lord De Cross profile image

    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Starting today..and perhaps tomorrow, don't follow that path of Sorrow...

  • Lord De Cross profile image

    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago


    Thanks for stopping by. Can you imagine a nightmare so real..? What you mention about second chances is so true. Only God knows when we will leave our physical existence.


  • emzitinasas profile image

    emzitinasas 6 years ago from Philippines

    Scary, sad but well made for everyone to realize something. Everyday is a second chance. Thanks for this.

  • Lord De Cross profile image

    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago

    Thanks frugalfamily,

    This story is based on modern days events( Continental, British aiways, Delta, KLM). If you check "catch me if you can" you will see the profiling..of the average candidate too. Nowadays, things have changed. Don't want to say it or admit it..., but I think today is who you know..and not what you know. Thanks for your comment! Hope to read your work too.


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    Brenda Trott, M.Ed 6 years ago from Houston, TX

    I missed PanAm but I'm really hesitant to watch it because those days were rough on women. Did it portray the truth in height/weight and marital status requirements? Your story is much more modern.

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    Joseph De Cross 6 years ago


    Was watching those PanAm GIRLS on the web..and just decided to come up with this story. What an inspiration huh? Thanks for stopping by Maria.

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    Eparisi679 6 years ago from Maryland

    Riveting!! This makes me antsy about getting on a plane anytime soon...then again, My dreams are pretty accurate as well :P Great piece!!