Anyone want to try and write a group poem - a line each....

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   manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

   Hi ya'll...been writing and working today...and used up all my tiny Brain's Power... !

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      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

        your wife told  me you forgot to use the mower 

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   manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

   I'd better rush to get it done...she'll be home in an hour !!

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      tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      And on your way there, don't forget the flowers !

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   blondepoetposted 14 years ago

   Come with me for a nice warm shower.

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   LEWJposted 14 years ago

   Or come and see the Eiffel Tower!

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   blondepoetposted 14 years ago

   Either way Im sure to wow ya!!!!!

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   manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

   The ladies here can sure bring it with the "Hubba-Hubba"!

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   blondepoetposted 14 years ago

   Cos on this bod I aint got no flubber

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   manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

   My brain juz' shorted out...and my knees turned to rubber

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   QuirkyPearlposted 14 years ago

   like a thin branch whipping between the north wind and the south

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    the raindrops fell softly and i opened my mouth

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    Jackson Riddleposted 14 years ago

    as I lay back to see the gasoline rainbow

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    Laura du Toitposted 14 years ago

    fumes almost choked me.... why I don't know

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    pollution fills the air...and makes my nausea grow

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    Stacey Macposted 14 years ago

    all you guys and girls, I'm enjoying this show!

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    It is quite a show...with each new twist...row by row

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    unfolding naturally, giving it a good flow

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    Leah Wingertposted 14 years ago

    to bad that I can not know

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    kwaltersposted 14 years ago

    Never knowing where's it's going to go

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    "Oh well...what the H_ll...On with the Show!"

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    CMHypnoposted 14 years ago

    Let the drums roll and the band start playing

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    Lady_Eposted 14 years ago

    everyone dancing with hips Swaying

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Sorry...no "long-ago" backstepping with quotes...that's a 10-yard penalty for "Poem Delaying"

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Hello, manly ! What are you saying ?

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          manlypoetrymanposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          Was wondering why the jumping around to past  lines...'tis very curious...but you know me...juz' playin'!

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    Naomi R. Coxposted 14 years ago

    Ain't going nowhere, here I'm stayin'

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Good for you...you stay here now...no straying!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Hi manly Hope you're playing

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    As always...though my brain has started frayin'

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    anyway I think I'm staying

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Oh goody...does that mean we'll be playin'?

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       that's what I'm saying

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    that's what I was sittin' here prayin'!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       now stand up and follow me !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Be gentle with me...I have one bad knee

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Don't you worry! I will be !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    I love it when you say that-makes me so happy!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       O K lets go and have a party !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Where shall we meet...'cause...I'm for sure...READY!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       lets meet in the park insome place shady

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    That would sure be great there...Pretty lady!

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    lets  sit on the lawn and watch the blue moon

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    with you...let's do like they use to say "and spoon"!?

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       iagree ! It's never too soon !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Ok then...show me the moon!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Look into my eyes. Can you seeit swoon ?

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    your eyes say so many things...and I hear a sweet melody tune

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    lets linger a bit more, feel free to tell me more

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Oh my dear...I have so much more in store...

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Well, why don't you begin. I implore !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    First I have a few things...get closer...that I'd like to explore?

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    Sure ! why not ! do you want to see more ?

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Ok...took a few secs...when you said yes... I passed out on the floor!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Oh! I thought you were a MAN! Maybe not anymore ?

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Just passed out from pure excitment...Please resume...i implore...!

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    tantrumposted 14 years ago

    then come closer, don't be afraid !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    trust me...dear lady...I would love to get closer ...no longer delayed

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       so lets see if you well play !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    stay right where your at...I'm on my way!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       I'm so near ! Please don't delay !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Those are the words I've been waiting to hear you say!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       i've been saying them all day !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    I juz' knew it the way...I saw your hips sway!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       but you're too lazy! you're driving me crazy !

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    All good things, my dear...your beauty makes my thinking a lil' hazy

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       excuses, excuses !Aren't you in ?

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    Sure I'm in...I'm in like flynn!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       i see you're trying !

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          tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          or maybe you're lying ?

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             manlypoetrymanposted 14 years agoin reply to this

             There's no lying...this man was ready for pryin'!

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                tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

                now it's too late!I'm  going to bed !

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          manlypoetrymanposted 14 years agoin reply to this

          you say trying...I say was already relying...!

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    manlypoetrymanposted 14 years ago

    ta-ta then later...there's other parties instead!

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       tantrumposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       Not as good as mine ! you were too late !

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