Let's Write A Poem Together,,,,,,,, NO RULES.

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   Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

   The snow so pure, white, new..........
   Evenly distributed,
   Weighing heavily upon the twigs,
   Of the branches,
   On the trees ...........
   Near where i live
   
              your turn.

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      mistrunnerposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      spreading out across the horizon
      beyond my vision.......
      blanketing the ground
      covering the rocks
      living though still......
      the snow that covers
      the place where i live.......
      
      
      
      your turn

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      SHARKY619posted 14 years agoin reply to this

      AND STILL... AS I REFLECT..
      I REMEMBER WHEN..............
      I LEFT TO PICK UP A PIZZA,
      I CAME BACK WITH COCAINE...
      THE BABIES ATE PEANUT BUTTER
      FOR DINNER THAT NIGHT,....
      I LEFT TO BUY SCHOOL CLOTHES...
      I CAME BACK WITH CRACK....
      THE BABIES DIDN'T WEAR
      ANYTHING OFF THE RACK THAT YEAR...
      I LEFT TO BUY GROCERIES...
      CAME BACK WITH MORE DOPE...
      MY BABIES ARE OKAY THOUGH...
      THEY'VE ALREADY LOST ALL HOPE...
      I LEFT TO PAY THE WATER BILL...
      NOT ONLY DID I BUY CRACK...
      I NEVER DID GO BACK...
      MY BABIES HAVEN'Y SEEN ME STILL....

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   seasoningposted 14 years ago

   I look through my window,
     See your footprints.
     They cannot be denied,
     I would recognise even the very
     sole of your shoe,
     Around my place,
     Did i miss you,
     Whilst i was sleeping?

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   poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

   I almost feel your presence,
   Afraid once more to peer
   Through the window,
   Lest you should
   Catch a glimpse,
   Antiscipation
   My heart races,

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      zampanoposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      I recognize you well.
      Even if it was not signed I'd know it'd be you.
      
      Cry no more my dear
      Though far away in the distance
      I remain to your heart near
      sharing close moments of laud existence
      into your arms, peace forgot fear

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   I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 14 years ago

   as i lay dreaming
   by the fire
   nestled as a fetal shell
   i feel you
   your breath
   caresses my cheek
   and then

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      zampanoposted 14 years agoin reply to this

      Dream away, innocent one
      I'll keep this watch
      untill your rest is done...

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   chinweikeposted 14 years ago

   my mind's eyes never sleeps
   always watching you
   making sure nothing happens to you
   
   my mind's ears never get blocked
   always listening to you
   so that i can hear you
   when you say I -o-e you
   
   my mind itself never rest
   always thinking of ways
   to make you happy

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   poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

   and then i hear your voice,
   calling to me...........
   The fire so warm,
   My arms empty,
   longing for your touch,
   I feel your warmth,
   I hear you

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   Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

   you the one i can depend,
   You so vunlrable
   I offer you a rose,
   from my hand,
   Once wilted,
   but , you made it grow,
   Fed it,
   nurtured it,
   now the rose,
   sits beside you and the fire,
   Are you lonely still?

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   marcel285posted 14 years ago

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   Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

   what do i read into the silence,
   Only that no words will arrive,
   Just at this moment,
   I can wait,
   I am in no hurrry

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    Brenda Durhamposted 14 years ago

    And suddenly it comes to me
    the thought, so crystal-clear
    that you, just you, are where I live
    you are what my heart holds dear
    
    
    (sorry, guys, I do things in specific rhyme; can't follow the rhythm of the original....)

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    chinweikeposted 14 years ago

    Heard melodies are sweet
    unheard melodies are sweeter
    
    am happy being with you
    am happier chatting with you
    
    it hurts me to hera you cry
    it hurts me more to see you sad
    
    i love it when i kiss you
    i love it the more when i hear you ask for more......

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    ninapoetposted 14 years ago

    until it is all that I can do but erase your pain
    and make you whole again

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    chinweikeposted 14 years ago

    then i will kiss away
    all your tears
    
    wash away all your blemishes
    
    and give hope for a brighter
    
    tomorrow

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    donotfearposted 14 years ago

    Until the stark memory came back
    Rushing like the wind.....
    of what you promised long ago
    and you never did.
    Release me from this passion
    release me from the glue.
    I want to go on with the future
    even without you.

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    shazwellynposted 14 years ago

    for life is but a gloaming,
    Ill keep this just for fun.
    
    Where for ought thou,
    he cries outloud and run

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    Home Girlposted 14 years ago

    There was some damsel Natasha,
    She loved two men with great passion
    Could not make the right choice,-
    Cried on top of her voice,
    That unfortunate damsel Natasha.

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    chinweikeposted 14 years ago

    then be focused
    for yesterday is dead and gone
    
    the only present we have is the present
    
    grow up and learn to admire nature
    for it brings peace of mine and love

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    zampanoposted 14 years ago

    as the thickness of night is dissolved by the lightness of a new day
    I retire to intimate hideaway
    slumber gaining upon watchfullness
    only my heart keeps beating, rest regardless
    for my love it calls like an eternal pray.

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    I hear you,
      Your prayers, so soon will be answered,
      The snow now falling fast,
      My heart beating to it's rhthym
      Alone, once more, without you
      My love

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    dyonderposted 14 years ago

    a dream
    chill reawake
    the fires of passion
    chill reawake
    stones cast
    a sheltered form
    the storms passed
    as your hand

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    chinweikeposted 14 years ago

    And holding your hands
    sends down the message
    
    I never understood it
    At first, untill..
    
    I find my self staying awake
    all night thing of you

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    Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

    beginning to understand,
    A beginning of something beautiful,
    My hand in yours,
    Two hearts beating......

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    dyonderposted 14 years ago

    mouth to lips
    I devour
    you consume
    our forms are nothing
    in the fires
    flesh to ash
    bound by fluids
    flow
    word as blood
    love
    there's a heart in hand

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    The fire still burning,
    The snow still falling,
    Listening for your footsteps,
    I see the vision,
    Of the heart
    In your hand

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    Don Wposted 14 years ago

    tarzan in the jungle
    got a belly ache
    running to the toilet
    brrrp, too late
    
    What?! You said no rules.
    
    hmm is that the time already . . .

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       TJBaruchposted 14 years agoin reply to this

       A Lesson in Phonetics
       
       Doc Pufal's remarks were indicative
       Of dipthongs and plosives applicative
       When out of his bum
       'Tis rumored by some
       Blew a l-o-n-g and LOUD anal fricative

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    poetrypassionposted 14 years ago

    I don't be like cinderella .
    
    Life is not a fairy tale ,
    so I don't expect to have a " happily ever after ending ."
    I don't wanna be the girl who has to wait for someone to rescue her .
    I want to explore this world , this life and not have to plan my whole life around finding "the one ."
    Some people go crazy over love and end up never finding it .
    I'd rather rescue myself .

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    Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

    poetry, just not for everyone,
      Is it even for you, or me.........
      The snow, the rain, the fire,
      The non rules,
      The fascination,
      No Cinderella,
      No Prince Charming,
      Rather harsh reality,
      The Ugly sisters once more,
      May win out,
      Will we allow to happen?

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    seasoningposted 14 years ago

    I picture you lying beside the fire,
    In what would otherwise be a cold place,
    Listening to the words,
    Of a song,
    That once meant so much.

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    dyonderposted 14 years ago

    a simple sort of passion              once a maiden
    pass up the flame                      had sisters (3)
    for the wind's action                in an age forbidden
    a testamount to                        she spoke disease
    the power of the rose                tempted by madness
    petals intertwined                    she trusted the world
    roots kissed earth                    in a moment of weakness
    thorn meets flesh                     earned what was deserved
    faltering steps                       mirror, crystal, scrying
    stone                                  her sisters (3)
    wind                                   and bone petal
    rising water                          cry for her
    eclipse of time                       she has only time
    where was it                          cry for her
    this thing I lost                     moments divine
    & was it ever mine                     the sign
    for the words never were

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    Earthscribeposted 14 years ago

    ...and a pause,
    
    breath
    reading in light and shadow,
    the chill creeping near the window,
    
    but the love
    oh the Love! of strangers
    
    coming together in unity of
    arts, effort without strain,
    
    warms me
    with yummy intoxication.
    
    And feeling welcomed
    by the hub within hubs,
    
    the unity of all things
    expressed by cooperative arts,
    
    a collage of mind & emotive
    text.
    
    The forum-fitting garment
    of our mutual smiles!
    
    Now, seeing the light coming--

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    seasoningposted 14 years ago

    The light shining through,
    As indeed it always will.
    The weather,
    changed for the better,
    The tone and mood of the poem,
    Still and settled,
    Hungry for more,
    Love and light,
    I hear you

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    Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

    emotive text,
    
    Encouagement,
    
    A little love in the air.
    
       maybe,
    
    sunshine in our hearts.
    
    A rainbows end,
    
    
    magnets of possibility,
    
    a POEM let us share
    
    our words, and thoughts

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    seasoningposted 14 years ago

    not much to add,
    
    i feel so sad,
    
    my love has gone away,
    
    hope he will back,
    
    cant think of anything to rhyme with back
    
    Not a great day for poetry for me, sorry

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    I*n*v*i*c*t*u*sposted 14 years ago

    there is no rhyme
    
    there is no season
    
    while your away my heart falls
    
    as a meteor crashing
    
    in an empty sea

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    seasoningposted 14 years ago

    no reason, no rhyme,
    no season,
    nor time,
    just a longing,
    to connect,
    as somehow you direct,
    the way forward,
    is with you,
    a sea
    calm now,
    for i have at my fingertips,
    all i need
    I hear you

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    an empty sea,
    
    please, come back to me..........
    
    this is the season,
    
    for the sun to shine
    
    The rainbow's end in sight
    
    Please don't go
    
    Please...............
    
    Maybe just one more line

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    dyonderposted 14 years ago

    ...let me know
       rapture
    (in your heart)

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    Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

    poor babies......

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    chinweikeposted 14 years ago

    as poor as they might be
    there is still a rich city for
    
    a city where all hope
    is in-tact
    
    posterity is watching remember?
    we will all account for how
    we care for them
    
    make love the basis of all
    you do to yor children
    
    for they are the future leaders
    and.....

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    SHARKY619posted 14 years ago

    NO MORE A VICTIM.....
    
    THE DISEASE I HAVE IS OFTEN FATAL
    
    IT ROTS THE SOUL, LEAVES YOU WICKEDLY UNSTABLE...
    
    IT ATE THE FAMILY TIES THAT I GREW UP TO KNOW...
    
    IT HATES YOUR MOTHER,
    
    WILL TEASE YOU TO KILL YOUR BROTHER...
    
    IT WON'T LET ME SLEEP,
    
    IT MAKES ME CREEP THE NIGHT THROUGH...
    
    ON A QUEST FOR MORE....
    
    IT LEAVES YOU SICKEDLY DISABLED...
    
    THE DISEASE I HAVE IS OFTEN FATAL
    
    IT BLINDS YOU AS TO WHO YOU ARE,
    
    WHO YOU WERE
    
    OR JUST....
    
    WHO YOU COULD BE...
    
    IT LETS YOU CHOOSE OVER YOUR CHILDREN,
    
    TO PUSH THEM TO THE SIDE...
    
    IT WILL PULL YOUR BABY RIGHT OUT OF THE CRADDLE...
    
    YES! IT IS OFTEN FATAL...
    
    IT WILL TAKE YOU DOWN THE DARKEST PATH,
    
    THERE IS NO WHERE TO HIDE...
    
    IT MAKES YOU FEEL AS IF NO ONE IS ON YOUR SIDE...
    
    IT TAKES YOUR FREEDOM IF YOU'RE LUCKY
    
    YOUR SOUL WITH NO QUALMS.....
    
    IT RIDES YOU LIKE A DRAGON SIEZED!!!
    
    WITH HATRED & FIRE...
    
    A LUST FOR A LIFE TIME GONE....
    
    IT WILL SLAM YOU STRONG,
    
    SAP YOUR STRENGTH TIL THERE IS NO WRONG!!!
    
    THE DISEASE I HAVE WAS NOT FATAL...THIS TIME!!
    
    I DIDN'T WANT TO DIE,
    
    I JUST WANTED TO GET HIGH..
    
    I FOUGHT WITH ALL MY BEING..
    
    I DUG DEEP WITHIN MY SOUL'
    
    I FOUND I WANTED ME MORE THAN THEE...
    
    THE DISEASE I HAVE,
    
    HAS FAILED THIS TIME
    
    FOR I HAVE XOTED...
    
    ONCE AGAIN I AM FREE TO BE ME.....
    
    NO MORE A VICTIM........
    
    SHARKY

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    Home Girlposted 14 years ago

    Those passing by, they carry features you had -
    One walks like you, another smiles - you used to smile
    Like that. Hands movement,same black gloves you wore,
    Familiar features,voice, hight, anything can trigger pain -
    It does not go away. Please, time, just let me live again.
    I want forget, I'll never ask for more...

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    chinweikeposted 14 years ago

    even if i ask for more
    i can never ask for too much
    
    even when it seems i ask for too much
    i know my source will never dry
    
    i only need enough
    and enough is all i get

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    seasoningposted 14 years ago

    enough to get us through the day,
    tomorrow will be better,
    Rejoice in the hope......
    Endure,
    Live love peace.

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    mega1posted 14 years ago

    YOU want to waste the wind
    YOU took that stone from my heart
    YOU keep the water that ran out
    YOU pour out love with every glance
    YOU still have the power to wound me
    YOU know better and you still want me

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    Miss Takeposted 14 years ago

    Want you, need you....
    desire you,
    love you
    but will never
    own you......

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    You disappoint me
    You never did love me,
    You love loopholes,
    You hate me,
    You miss me           do you?

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    nadiaazharposted 14 years ago

    i'm trying a poem for the first time
    i hope it will rhyme
    without rhyming,a poem doesnt sound fine
    it's a difficult job that you have assign
    i think i sound silly,while scratching my hairline
    do i make you smile?

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    you make me smile,
    all the while,
    you are a poet,
    so go and show it...... oops bad line

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    Poppa Bluesposted 14 years ago

    Ours was a whirlwind courtship always together having fun
    Sharing lots of drinks and laughs, always on the run
    It was there on the dance floor as I held you tight
    I gazed into your eyes and saw your love light
    We were getting closer at least that’s what I thought
    But, I was just a placeholder, for another whom you sought

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    poetlorraineposted 14 years ago

    yes i leaned on your shoulder,
    And looked round the room.
    Wishing that i could get away soon,
    Before the handsome young man,
    Who was giving me the eye,
    Went home, to his wife,
    Leaving me high and dry.....

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