Alyssa's Response to Word prompt Week 30 (Clouds)

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Hi.  Alyssa has written a fantastic piece on this word prompt.
   You won't be disappointed.   You will be amazed.
   
   Take a few moments to read her about her fantastic encounter.
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/poetry-prompt-30
   ~ Alyssa Nichol
   
   Alyssa, I've posted the link to it in the article. https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … ty-Week-30

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

   Alyssa
   I hope this post works to showcase your writing.
   
   Here's my response & thanks for a wonderful piece of writing.
   
   Alyssa
   This was a welcome site this morning to see you had finally written the one for Cloud.
   
   Your mind supersedes us all...this wonderful, little story is so intriguing. 
   It draws us in &  captivates us.
   
   It had me touching and picturing each single cloud like this old man and his briefcase were really right in front of me.
   
   I'm gonna post a link in the article.
   
   Absolutely one of your best works.

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   Jodahposted 2 years ago

   This was a wonderful response from Alyssa. I hope a cloud salesman comes to my door.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      John
      I wouldn't mind seeing this cloud salesman too.

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   Peggy Wposted 2 years ago

   Alyssa's poem was a delight to read.  I'll be hopefully looking for that cloud salesman at my door!

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   manlypoetrymanposted 2 years ago

   Very inspiring theme...Alyssa. Great Read. I know now that I want to buy a cloud, as well! Well Done.

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   Pamela99posted 2 years ago

   I think Alyssa's poems are always unique and wonderful to read. Thank you.

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   Alyssa Nicholposted 2 years ago

   Thank you all so much! I wanted to take this one down a different road. Letting it marinate in the back of my mind, I thought, wouldn't it be interesting if someone was trying to sell me a cloud? A sort of new-age Lorax tale (remember them bottling air and selling it?) with a Wizard of Oz-type feel. It took a while to get it right. I'm particularly proud of this piece that stretched my muscles in a unique way.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Alyssa
      You should be proud of this piece.
      
      It's absolutely marvelous.
      
      I'd buy a cloud....great work.

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