It Was Not a Solar Eclipse by Misbah

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   surovi99posted 3 years ago

   This is a pathetic poem about a woman who is betrayed in a relationship and therefore, takes her life away. It is written by Misbah. In her own words, read the poem from the following link:
   https://discover.hubpages.com/literatur … ar-Eclipse

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Misbah
      You've penned this well.
      
      It went silent for her.  I hope she finally found the peace she was searching for & that he feels regret.
      
      He did bury her with a few tears.
      
      It's so sad that we often let someone into our life only to find they don't care.
      That feeling is so dark & alone.
      
      Great write.

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         Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

         Dear Bredz, thank you so much for reading and your kind and thoughtful comments. I don't think those who betray feel regret later in life. There are a few who feel it and become prisoners of thoughts without bail, but as far as I can tell, this is a very rare thing. People nowadays are too preoccupied with themselves to notice others, which is a shame. May God have mercy on all of us. Ameen!
         
         Yes, it's so sad that sometimes we let someone enter into our lives only to discover that they don't care. Without a doubt, that feeling is very gloomy.
         
         I truly appreciate your kindness and support. Much Love! Take care and stay happy.
         
         Blessings and Hugs!!

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for your kindness in posting this forum, Rosina. Much Gratitude, dear friend.
      Blessings and Love as always!!

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   billybucposted 3 years ago

   A sad tale, made all the more sad because it probably happens daily around the world.  Well done, MIsbah!  May the sad and despondent people of the world find solace and comfort.
   
   Blessings always

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Ameen! Mr. Bill, yes, the story is sad, but as you pointed out, the more tragic aspect is that it happens daily all around the globe. Sir, I am grateful for your kind words. Thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous remarks. Much appreciated! God bless you and your loved ones. Ameen!!
      Blessings always!!

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   What a sad tale!  Hopefully, anyone who is that despondent will be able to reach out to others to get the help they need to prevent such a desperate act.  Thanks Rosina for sharing Misbah's poem with us.

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      Misbah786posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Hello, Peggy. We live in a world that is constantly racing. Sadly, we fail to notice other people's sorrows and concerns. I'm sure there are some good people, God's angels, who must come to help such people in their time of sorrow and worry. Taking one's own life is not an easy task, but what if death appears to be easier than life? I wish everyone a happy and prosperous life. Ameen.
      Thank you so much for reading and your valuable feedback. Much appreciated.
      Blessings and Love!!

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