Misbah has created an impactful poem on life.

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  1. ravirajan01 profile image94
    ravirajan01posted 2 years ago

    Please read Misbah's beautiful poem "Bury Them in the Depths of the Earth".This poem talks about life in general from a viewpoint of a person who is a bit frustrated and tired with life and has tried to portray her emotions in the shape of a beautiful poem. Thanks for this intense imagery Misbah.

    https://hubpages.com/literature/Bury-it … -the-earth

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Ravi, thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous comments, as well as for sharing my poem. Your kindness is very much appreciated!!

      Take care and have a great day ahead.

      Many Blessings to you!!

    2. surovi99 profile image84
      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      This is a sad poem in which a girl exhausted and frustrated expresses her emotions in the form of a beautiful poem. This very act might help her to deal with life better and think more positively. I liked the poem very much and appeciate it. Thanks for sharing, Misbah.

      Thanks Ravi for sharing her poem..

      1. Misbah786 profile image85
        Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Rosina, thank you so much for reading and leaving such kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Much appreciated!
        Take care and stay healthy
        Blessings and lots of Love

    3. ChitrangadaSharan profile image90
      ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Hello Misbah!
      Beautifully expressed emotions, about getting frustrated, if the dreams and desires are not fulfilled.
      This happens to all of us, may be countless number of times.
      But, we have to—have to, pull ourselves up, gather bits and pieces, and dream/ hope again—and again.
      I believe that, Hope is always better than hopelessness.
      Every story doesn’t have a happy ending, but life moves on, as we think of other alternatives.
      Thank you Misbah, for sharing this well crafted poem.
      Thank you Raviji, for highlighting this in the forum.

      1. Misbah786 profile image85
        Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Dear Di, I always appreciate your insightful and encouraging remarks. I completely agree with you. Unquestionably, hope is always better than hopelessness. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and for your beautiful comments. Greatly appreciated!

        Take care and enjoy your day!
        Many Blessings and lots of Love!

      2. Brenda Arledge profile image80
        Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Chitrangada...
        I love your response to Misbah poem.

        1. ChitrangadaSharan profile image90
          ChitrangadaSharanposted 2 years agoin reply to this

          Thank you Brenda!

  2. Jodah profile image90
    Jodahposted 2 years ago

    Such a beautifully written poem, with deep feeling clearly expressed. You poetry is always a pleasure to read, Misbah.
    Thank you for sharing, Ravi.

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for reading and for your continuous support, John. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always appreciate your kindness, dear friend. Much Gratitude!
      God bless you always. Take care and stay happy.

      Many blessings to you!

  3. AliciaC profile image92
    AliciaCposted 2 years ago

    Misbah has created a very powerful poem about a person facing problems in life. I like Rosina's idea that writing about her difficulties could help the subject of the poem deal with the problems.

    Thanks for sharing Misbah's poem, Ravi.

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Linda, thank you so much for your lovely and kind words. I always appreciate your positive feedback on my work. I'm glad you found this poem to be powerful.
      Take care and stay healthy.
      Blessings and lots of Love to you!

    2. surovi99 profile image84
      surovi99posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Linda.

  4. Brenda Arledge profile image80
    Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years ago

    Misbah...
    This is a powerful piece that speaks volumes.
    The hurt we feel inside makes us want to go to the other side.

    Sadly it's not the answer, for we have so much more to fulfill here on earth.

    When our time is up, our path will meet up with the dreams we desire in our hearts.

    The ones we love want us to continue.   To make the most of a life they didn't have enough time to share with us.

    Don't let the darkness in...let the light shine.

    Hugs from across the universe
    Bredz

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Dear Bredz, I wholeheartedly agree with your nice and thoughtful words. Thank you so much for reading and for your thoughtful comments. I am grateful for your kindness and support, dear friend. Take care and stay safe. Sending You Love and Blessings.
      Hugs!!!

  5. Moondot1822 profile image96
    Moondot1822posted 2 years ago

    A wonderful poem by Misbah Somehow, it can relate to every human being. Humans cannot exist without dreams. When dreams cannot be fulfilled, they bring pain and sorrow. So, the wise option is to go through this phase with patience. 
    Stay safe and healthy...

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Moon, I'm so glad you liked it. No doubts, patience is the key. Thank you so much for your lovely and thoughtful comments, dear sister. Much Gratitude!

      Take care and have a beautiful day ahead.
      Many Blessings and Love as always!!

    2. Brenda Arledge profile image80
      Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Patience...
      There are sone days that jumps out the window

    3. Brenda Arledge profile image80
      Brenda Arledgeposted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Humans cannot exist without dreams...so powerful

      1. Misbah786 profile image85
        Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

        Yes, this is absolutely true!

  6. Pamela99 profile image87
    Pamela99posted 2 years ago

    As I m sure others have stated, this is a sad poem about a girl that is so frustrated about life. The words beautifully express her hopelessness. I always love reading your poems Misbah, and this one was no exception. Blessings and much love.

    Thank you for posting Misbah's poem Ravi.

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Pamela, I always appreciate your positive feedback on my work. Thank you very much for reading and for your lovely comment, dear friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
      Take care and stay healthy.
      Sending you lots of Love and Blessings

  7. Peggy W profile image94
    Peggy Wposted 2 years ago

    While the girl in Misbah's poem may have lost hope, her faith in the next life endures.  That may be enough to pull her through this temporary feeling of hopelessness.  Thanks for the dual sharing of Misbah's poetry Ravi and Moondot.

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Peggy, thank you so much for your beautiful and insightful comment. Yes, even though the girl in my poem is losing hope, her faith in the next life endures. I genuinely appreciate your thoughtful response.
      I hope you're having a lovely day with your friends and family today. Happy Easter!

      Sending you many Blessings and Love

  8. vidsagster profile image87
    vidsagsterposted 2 years ago

    Beautiful poem with deep emotions, Misbah. I loved it. Yes when we face disappointments and frustrations in life, the thought of a better afterlife will keep us going and we continue to hope and dream again. One should never give up on life. Stay blessed dear friend.

    1. Misbah786 profile image85
      Misbah786posted 2 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much for reading and for your insightful comment, Vidya. I am glad you liked it.
      Take care and stay healthy.
      Blessings and Love as always!!

 
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