The Empathetic Cashier at the market, by Rosina

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 3 years ago

   Please take some time to read this interesting story by Rosina.
   https://hubpages.com/literature/The-Emp … the-Market

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 3 years ago

   Hello Rosina!
   I enjoyed reading your story. It’s interesting, how to brought the characters of your previous stories, in this story. This is well thought of, and you have conveyed an important message in your conclusion.
   Thank you for sharing another wonderful short story.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I am so delighted, Chitrangada that you shared the link of my new story and called my muse interesting, bringing in characters of my two previously written stories. I am glad you liked the concluding message of the story. I appreciate your comments a ton.

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   Pamela99posted 3 years ago

   I just finished reading your story, and I loved it Rosina. I think you have certainly met the requirements of the prompt. The stagey is interesting, and I like you final conclusions.
   
   Thank you for posting Rosina's story Chitrangada.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Pamela, for reading my story with interest. I am happy to know that you think I have met the requirements of the prompt and that you like the conclusion. I appreciate you supporting my work.

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   vidsagsterposted 3 years ago

   Beautiful story with a very good message. I enjoyed reading your story Rosina. I liked the way you brought characters from your previous stories together and weaved them into this story. Thanks Chitrangada for sharing.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Vidya, for your very generous comments. I am pleased to know you liked my story with a meaningful message. I am glad you appreciated how I weaved the characters from my two previously written stories into this story. Gratitude for your heart-warming comments.

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   Peggy Wposted 3 years ago

   You did a great job Rosina with this prompt of bringing characters from different stories together and blending them into a new one.  Cashiers undoubtedly face many people a day, all with different circumstances in their lives.  Thanks Chitrangada for featuring Rosina's writing.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I am glad you enjoyed my strategy, bringing in characters from different stories and blending them into a new one. Thank you, Peggy. Your comments are truly appreciated.

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   Misbah786posted 3 years ago

   Rosina, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your wonderful story. Through this story, you have conveyed an important message, which I greatly appreciate. Like everyone else, I also liked how you incorporated characters from your two previous stories. It was an enjoyable read. Thank you so much for taking the time to share.
   Ramadan Mubarak to you and your family. 
   
   Thanks Chitra Di for sharing the link to  Rosina's hub and for starting this discussion.
   
   Many Blessings and Love to both of you!!

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I am delighted, Misbah, you enjoyed my story and that you also liked my idea of incorporating characters from my previous two stories. I happy that you liked the message in my story. I appreciate your comments a lot.
      
      Ramadan Mubarak too to you and yourr family.
      
      Blessings and love to you too.

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   Ankita Bposted 3 years ago

   This is a well thought story, Rosina. You have beautifully brought the characters from the previous stories and crafted an interesting story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      I am pleased that you enjoyed my story and that you found it interesting that I brought characters from my previous stories to craft this new story. Your comments are very much appreciated, Ankita.

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   Jodahposted 3 years ago

   An excellent story with a good message, Rosina. I thought I had already commented here, but it appears not. You met the prompt/challenge guidelines very well also.
   
   Thank you for sharing the link, Chitrangada.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      You have really surprised me, John crafting a wonderful story based on the prompt I wrote this story. Thank you so much for your generous comments. I am delighted to know you think I met the prompt guidelines very well and that it is a good story with a good message. My sincere gratitude to you once again.

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 3 years ago

   Rosina
   We truly never know what another person is going through at the moment.
   There are those who wear it on their sleeve & then there are those who keep everything hidden inside.
   Be kind & understanding to everyone.
   Great message.
   
   You do quite good with these stories.

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      surovi99posted 3 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you, Brenda, for your constructive comments. I am glad you like the message of the story. I appreciate all your comments. Have a great day!

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