Worthy of a Dreamer

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months ago

   Chrish Canosa's wrote us a piece about a Dreamer
   
   https://hubpages.com/literature/worthy-of-a-dreamer

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   Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months ago

   Hey Chrish...
   This is is a bit deep and profound.
   
   The dreamer seems like he wants to stop dreaming and finally be a part of someone's life...perhaps this one who has admired.
   
   Fearing though...that he might come up short.
   
   He still wants this connection.
   
   Interesting write...i may be way off on my decipher

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   Jodahposted 23 months ago

   It is great to see you writing here again, Chrish. This is quite a complex but beautifully written poem in response to Brenda's "dreams" prompt. I think I need to read it two or three times to embrace it fully.
   Thanks for sharing, Brenda.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      John
      I had to read it several times myself...
      But it's good.

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   Treshtyposted 23 months ago

   I love how you decipher the message Ms Brenda!!!!
   Your '' he still wants this connection '' made me realized that yeah! She's right!!!
   I never want to abondoned these blaring ideas and wonders and questions in my head. And i completely admire my thoughts of the world although sometimes it gets heavy because I feel deeply.
   
   Please be well always Ms Brenda!!! Sending power hugs!!!!!!!
   And I sincerely appreciate you for sharing.

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      Brenda Arledgeposted 23 months agoin reply to this

      No problem Chrish & thank you for enjoying how I deciphered this one.

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   Treshtyposted 23 months ago

   I'm always happy to see you Sir John!!!!
   Thank you for taking the time to read! Likewise sir John, I need to examine my thoughts as well several times to make sure it is what I really want to say.
   
   I'm always happy to be here:)
   Sending power hugs!!!! I also missssssss hugging people here hahahaha

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 23 months ago

   Hello Chrish,
   So nice to see you publishing again. As others have said, this is insightful with deep thoughts, which needs to be read again and again. But, these are well crafted, with beautiful lines, and you have excelled as a poet.
   Thank you for sharing.
   Thank you Brenda.

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   surovi99posted 23 months ago

   This is a lovely poem, Chrish, which I didn't make out the first time round. I guess the others are right when they say it has to be gone through several times. Your imagination and words are thought-provoking and need to be pondered upon. I enjoyed reading your poem though. Thank you for sharing.
   
   Thank you, Brenda, for sharing her post.

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   Treshtyposted 23 months ago

   Awwwww your generous thoughts makes my heart melt Ms Sharan!!!!!!
   
   I appreciate you a bunch for stopping by.
   Sending power hugs!

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   Treshtyposted 23 months ago

   My pleasure Ms Rosina!
   Thank you so much for taking taking the time to comment
   Truly appreciated.
   
   Sending power hugs all the way from Philippines!!!!

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