Little Stars of Sky by Gianella Labrador

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   Jodahposted 6 weeks ago

   https://hubpages.com/literature/little-stars-of-sky
   
   I pleasing piece of poetry asking the stars for some answers.
   Thanks for sharing, Gianella.

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      Genna Eastposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      Thank you, John, for posting this thread.  I love this clever poem, Gianella.  We have all gazed into the celestial night on occason and wondered if the stars may hold answers to the secrets we hold dear.

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   Gianella Labradorposted 6 weeks ago

   thank you too for sharing in discussions. its been a while since im able to stick with this kind of pattern that is short and simple

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   ChitrangadaSharanposted 6 weeks ago

   Hi Gianella,
   Lovely composition.
   I enjoyed your well expressed poem and the interesting questions and answers with the stars.
   Thank you for sharing this.
   Thank you John.

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      Gianella Labradorposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      hi chit. hope you are doing well. happy you were able to enjoy my write up. it's nice talking to the stars sometimes and be guided by the moon wherever we go. i enjoyed trying this pattern for a change, its a discipline and self control not to get overwhelmed with words that's like im no longer writing a poem but paragraphs. and im happy to achieve it well. it was a good exercise for my brain.

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   Venkatachari Mposted 6 weeks ago

   Hi, Gianella. I liked this wonderful poem. It is very entertaining and beautiful full of thoughts expressed in puzzles and comforting answers. I always wondered about the stars shining so bright, but so little and so high too. Your answers are impressive.
   Thank you, John, for sharing the link to this poem.

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      Gianella Labradorposted 6 weeks agoin reply to this

      thank you Venkat for thinking that this piece was impressive and wonderful. hope these little stars can keep guiding us on this lifelong journey in whatever queries we may have, or simply just wherever we go, we know that if we see them up above us we are not alone.

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   Venkatachari Mposted 6 weeks ago

   Yes, Gianella, they are wonderful companions.

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