A treasure of land
Hidden among theories
Of mans different beliefs
I like the poem, but I'd like to probe you on your intent. Is your poem implying that the philosophic/religious beliefs of man are inspired by their geographic location?
Keep writing, my friend.
I would think it's saying that irregardless of location, there is a belief of some sort or another going on great job, DomShadows.
There are actually no set rules. Basically 17 or less syllables.
There are a number of specific 'rules' that developed over time, but as with any art form, they are not necessarily followed. This is especially true in haiku written in English.
I will go look it up, I seem to remember that it must be three lines with a certain amount of syllables in each. Like a sonnet there must be flexibility but the if the basic form is bent too much it becomes something else I would say.
The basic form is three lines following a 5-7-5 syllable pattern. Technically, there should also be a reference to nature or the seasons, and there should be a 'turn' where the grammatical structure shifts somewhere within the haiku.
Friends, Romans, Countrymen
Lend me your ears
They are wasted here!
Ignoring the fact that the first line has too many syllables, not a big issue - the second and third lines also do not have enough syllables and there is no turn at the end of a line - It might be better as :
Friends, Romans, Countrymen
Lend me your ears because er
They are wasted here!
although this is not any great improvement
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