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Haiku

  1. kpfingaz profile image74
    kpfingazposted 10 years ago

    A thread I have seen
    Buried no indication
    so this is for you.

    I tried. I'm not a pro at this in fact I just learned about this haiku stuff and thought it was beautiful stuff. So I'm practicing.

    I saw a thread that mentioned haiku on it but its buried and doesn't have any indication of it being a haiku thread so I figured I start one that you could all participate in.

    For those who don't know what a haiku is, this would be fun. You don't have to be good at it, I'd still love to see those haiku.

    A haiku is a short poem of Japanese origin with only three lines
    - the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7 syllables and the last has 5 syllables.


    It usually encompasses one idea or emotion with at least a small break in the flow.

    So exhausted from
    an extended day at work
    Sleep is calling me. smile

  2. Stacie Naczelnik profile image74
    Stacie Naczelnikposted 10 years ago

    I'm not sure, but you might be referring to a post I made quite awhile ago: Hey Poets!

    It is about haiku, and trying to make a collection of haiku written by hubbers (and other readers, of course): Home of the Hub Haiku

    And, Paraglider's limerick hub: How to Write a Limerick

    Thanks for sharing your haiku!



    Oh, insomnia
    I'm unwillingly awake
    Sleep, the elusive

  3. renegadeoffunk profile image51
    renegadeoffunkposted 10 years ago

    Worker bees can leave
    Even drones can fly away
    The queen is their slave

    One of my favorites, from "Fight Club."

  4. Guru-C profile image77
    Guru-Cposted 10 years ago

    Thank you so much, kpfingaz, for the haiku guidelines!!!!!!!


    Kittie sits on floor,
    Her gaze looks beyond me,
    Branches find their way.

  5. kpfingaz profile image74
    kpfingazposted 10 years ago

    Yeah, keep this thread going and we'll have a nice collection.

    My heart beats for you
    Deeply in love with your soul
    You are desired.

  6. jimmythejock profile image87
    jimmythejockposted 10 years ago

    Write about your passion today
    share your magic words
    become an addict of the hub


    have fun fellow hubaholics.........jimmy

  7. Paraglider profile image93
    Paragliderposted 10 years ago

    OK, here's an offering -


    new fallen chestnut
    rolls free from its cracked scrotum
    red lights in your hair


    And one in broad Scots, for Jimmy -


    blackies rype the rowan
    slitter rid draps faar corbies
    howk a mawkit tod

  8. Kenny Wordsmith profile image81
    Kenny Wordsmithposted 10 years ago

    Peace parabolas
    Sake of better or verse
    O Paraglider!


    What fun! smile

  9. renegadeoffunk profile image51
    renegadeoffunkposted 10 years ago

    "Glory is Fleeting"
    Napoleon Bonaparte
    Well, he should know

 
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