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Oh Wise and Imaginative Writers....

  1. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    I come to you asking for help. I'm stuck! big_smile

    I am at a scene where there has to be a plan made for stopping the demons from destroying the New Year Masquerade Ball...and my brain and imagination has drawn a blank.

    Help? Please?

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  2. cosette profile image99
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    oOo sounds intriguing...i don't know anything about your story so i can't add anything...sorry sad

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  3. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    the scene is just where a group of teens will be getting together and making a plan on how stopping the demons from ruining their fun Ball. I just need a plan on how they are going to stop them.

    Don't really need to know more about it than that to throw in some ideas.

    Posted 3 weeks ago
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    sorry, type of demons? Is GOD availabe?
    or, silver bullets, holy water, crosses? Can they be lured into a cemetary, to be defetad by religous symbols? (I know, not original, but cool anyway.) How are the demons killed. I mena. whats thier weak point? Trickery, perhaps. A virign can lure the demons to a trap? Can they be abyssed, leaving room for a sequal?

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  5. cosette profile image99
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    Crazdwriter wrote:

    the scene is just where a group of teens will be getting together and making a plan on how stopping the demons from ruining their fun Ball. I just need a plan on how they are going to stop them.

    Don't really need to know more about it than that to throw in some ideas.

    hmm

    if i were writing this, i would research what demons are, their habits, idiosyncracies etc. then devise some sort of trap with something irresistible to lure them in. of course you'd have to think like a teenager since you are writing from that POV.

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  6. wesleycox profile image96
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    Silver usually always works against unnatural entities.  You could also call on superman.

    Posted 3 weeks ago
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    How about entering their realm and fighting them with weapons they are unprepared for?

    Posted 3 weeks ago
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    Then there's Maude ;p

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  9. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    wesleycox wrote:

    Silver usually always works against unnatural entities.  You could also call on superman.

    lol I didn't know you wanted to be in my story wesley

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  10. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    As for demons...these are all kinds of demons. not just one particular type you name it they are there

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  11. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    Justine76 wrote:

    sorry, type of demons? Is GOD availabe?
    or, silver bullets, holy water, crosses? Can they be lured into a cemetary, to be defetad by religous symbols? (I know, not original, but cool anyway.) How are the demons killed. I mena. whats thier weak point? Trickery, perhaps. A virign can lure the demons to a trap? Can they be abyssed, leaving room for a sequal?

    lol no God is not available that is why these teens are being trained as demon hunters.

    And silver bullets sound good but I need a plan how to know that they are at the Ball..like a rigged system or something

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  12. Poppa Blues profile image91
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    Crazdwriter wrote:

    I come to you asking for help. I'm stuck! big_smile

    I am at a scene where there has to be a plan made for stopping the demons from destroying the New Year Masquerade Ball...and my brain and imagination has drawn a blank.

    Help? Please?

    This is the perfect opportunity to introduce seduction with the promise of sex into your story. What demon isn't enticed into the world of the forbidden?

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  13. wesleycox profile image96
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    You should get ahold of fierycj to get your answers, he's the authority on that kind of stuff.  This is the best I can do to help you.

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  14. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    Poppa Blues wrote:

    Crazdwriter wrote:

    I come to you asking for help. I'm stuck! big_smile

    I am at a scene where there has to be a plan made for stopping the demons from destroying the New Year Masquerade Ball...and my brain and imagination has drawn a blank.

    Help? Please?

    This is the perfect opportunity to introduce seduction with the promise of sex into your story. What demon isn't enticed into the world of the forbidden?

    Sorry but can't do that because this is young adult...that would be crossing the line for that genre. lol I'll have to save that for a more adult type paranormal book

    Posted 3 weeks ago
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    cosette wrote:

    Crazdwriter wrote:

    the scene is just where a group of teens will be getting together and making a plan on how stopping the demons from ruining their fun Ball. I just need a plan on how they are going to stop them.

    Don't really need to know more about it than that to throw in some ideas.

    hmm

    if i were writing this, i would research what demons are, their habits, idiosyncracies etc. then devise some sort of trap with something irresistible to lure them in. of course you'd have to think like a teenager since you are writing from that POV.

    virgins. I am telling you, its always virgins!!!

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  16. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    that's a great idea. Thanks wesley I'll send him an email...where has he been? I haven't heard from him in a long time on here

    Posted 3 weeks ago
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    Crazdwriter wrote:

    that's a great idea. Thanks wesley I'll send him an email...where has he been? I haven't heard from him in a long time on here

    http://hubpages.com/profile/fierycj  There he is.

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  18. Crazdwriter profile image96
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    Justine76 wrote:

    cosette wrote:

    Crazdwriter wrote:

    the scene is just where a group of teens will be getting together and making a plan on how stopping the demons from ruining their fun Ball. I just need a plan on how they are going to stop them.

    Don't really need to know more about it than that to throw in some ideas.

    hmm

    if i were writing this, i would research what demons are, their habits, idiosyncracies etc. then devise some sort of trap with something irresistible to lure them in. of course you'd have to think like a teenager since you are writing from that POV.

    virgins. I am telling you, its always virgins!!!

    lol Justine again that is for more adult this is young adult and crossing the line

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  19. Justine76 profile image85
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    Crazdwriter wrote:

    I need a plan how to know that they are at the Ball..like a rigged system or something

    wait, you need to know who's at the ball? the demons? sorry about my virgin comment, I just saw a little too late that it has to be pg..
    ok. so. You need to get the demons to the ball, and have the fighters on the ready?

    Posted 3 weeks ago
  20. readytoescape profile image92
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    Mix Holy water in the deamons' Scotch Highball's


    You knew that one was coming didn't you

    Posted 3 weeks ago
 
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