I need some words - marketing words - effective words for a package. I created a card game years ago and have about 200 copies left that I want to sell during February because my game is related to Presidents.
I'm re-doing the packaging and am struggling with the wording. I have a very small space (the size of a playing card)
This is a very challenging game, BUT I've seen 10 year olds play it easily and learn the order of the Presidents.
SO, what is more appealing on a package for you as a parent or a shopper for a game for yourself. I market it on Amazon and will try for school organizations and President museums.
I only have space for about 13 characters in a small font
"Learning Fun"
"Challenging!
Fun!"
Unique! Fun!
Any other ideas? Help me stop perseverating on this with you ideas! Pleeeeeeeze - I'm driving myself crazy!
Thank you.
Can you supply a simple tutorial? Like how many cards, players and basic how to? I need a visual of the game so I can help you. I write sales copy sometimes so I may be able to come up with something catchy.
Cardisa, Thank you so much. I'm never quite sure how much I can say here on hubpages with the "overly promotional" policy. (I understand that's for hubs, but still it holds me back.) But, what the heck. We have an online version and the decks of cards that I'm trying to sell. The decks on Amazon can be seen here: http://www.amazon.com/Obama-Solitaire-n … B001O2WCO0
The online game is here: http://www.amazon.com/Obama-Solitaire-n … B001O2WCO0 (I am in the process of converting our 20 year old website, so my linking is off on these pages, but you can get the idea of how the game is played from here. This is my concept and my husband implemented the online software. However, as I said, I need to get the decks that I have sold in February (Presidents' month) and move one.
oh and I forgot
The game can be played by a variety of ages.
Do I say
"All Ages"
"10 to Adult"
Fun for All Ages"
"10 to 110" ?????????????
Examiner - THANKS! I'm worried though that I might lose high school kids is I put that bottom limit on it . What do you think?
Oh, Do I want to say "Brain Builder" ? That's not very pretty though
Try something like, "Game which exercises your brain".
Thanks again. I'll use that in my text.
If you think that the age of 10 will do that then lower it to maybe 8. How does that sound? If I remember right, I believe that you are older than 10 for High School. Plus, they have their own minds about what they want to do so it might not make a difference.
Putting an age limit on a "learning " game will shoot yourself in the foot. We know a 10 year old is NOT your market, your market is a 35 years old with a 10 year old child. the benefit is to help their child know the presidents better.
All parents think their child is smart. and they want the best advantages they can get for them If they want to help their child learn the president and they feel they are ready, don't let an age stamp on the box turn away a percentage of possible buyers.
The packaging has to appeal first to the Child, the Marketing message has to appeal to the parent. don't confuse the 2.
Like Cardisa said, you can easily do a tutorial ( video) to sell its virtues to the parents so they understand how it works.
You have to "claim a mountain" so to speak. is it a game? or is it a teaching device? Games are just games. A teaching device can be fun, but it has more value. Parents will pay more for a teaching device.
Thank you so much ChicagoPhotos. I put links on my to Cardisa. I like the "claim a mountain" concept. I have so many mountains, but the one unifying element is teaching/learning. I don't like the word edutainment, but that kinda puts it in a nut shell.
I think you're exactly right about parents thinking their child is smart enough for anything and thus, why limit the age. A ten-year old was with his parents at a political convention where we had a booth. I told him to play the game and come back to our booth when he knew the order of the Pres. Twenty minutes later he came back and recited them! He was really proud.
Oh, this is such a hot topic for me. I LOVE this part of marketing. So Billie first thing you do is do 1 million dollars worth of research into the right words. OR Look up the products that appeal to the same audience of parents you are looking to sell to and see what descriptive words they use. Go to a few sites that sell to your target and wee how they phrase things. That will narrow down the word search quickly.
Figure out what language your market listens to and use those words to market your deck of cards. So many people try to sell the wrong item to the wrong group of people, then they think something is wrong with the product.
So who is your market? and what other products do they buy?
right now you are asking a bunch of people who are not in your market what might work. The results may not be pretty.
by Sherri 12 years ago
I could say lots more here, but I want to hear from you. What do you think?
by romper20 12 years ago
I don't have pre teen children, but I say spank away.
by Audrey Hunt 11 years ago
Do you believe in spanking children?
by Destiny Rose 13 years ago
O.k guys , ya'll know I got rid of the abusive husband, I started the hub challenge, (only got 2 done but it was something any way) just worked really hard to get into a normal. peaceful life with 11 different caseworkers and counselers and crap it's hard to remember who is who......
by Clayton Hartford 10 years ago
Should spanking be an option?As a parent of a 2 1/2 year old boy, should spanking be a form of punishment? My wife says in only extreme cases, such as if he runs out the door and into the parking lot. But I say pretty much any time he doesn't listen and ignores 1-2 warnings, then a...
by Nspeel 12 years ago
Why are kids starting to be "deflowered" so young? Are these kids doing well in school and life?
Copyright © 2024 The Arena Media Brands, LLC and respective content providers on this website. HubPages® is a registered trademark of The Arena Platform, Inc. Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners. The Arena Media Brands, LLC and respective content providers to this website may receive compensation for some links to products and services on this website.
Copyright © 2024 Maven Media Brands, LLC and respective owners.
As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, hubpages.com uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.
For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at: https://corp.maven.io/privacy-policy
Show DetailsNecessary | |
---|---|
HubPages Device ID | This is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons. |
Login | This is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service. |
Google Recaptcha | This is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy) |
Akismet | This is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy) |
HubPages Google Analytics | This is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy) |
HubPages Traffic Pixel | This is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized. |
Amazon Web Services | This is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy) |
Cloudflare | This is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy) |
Google Hosted Libraries | Javascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the googleapis.com or gstatic.com domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy) |
Features | |
---|---|
Google Custom Search | This is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy) |
Google Maps | Some articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy) |
Google Charts | This is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy) |
Google AdSense Host API | This service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy) |
Google YouTube | Some articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy) |
Vimeo | Some articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy) |
Paypal | This is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy) |
Facebook Login | You can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy) |
Maven | This supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy) |
Marketing | |
---|---|
Google AdSense | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Google DoubleClick | Google provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Index Exchange | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Sovrn | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Facebook Ads | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Amazon Unified Ad Marketplace | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
AppNexus | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Openx | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Rubicon Project | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
TripleLift | This is an ad network. (Privacy Policy) |
Say Media | We partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy) |
Remarketing Pixels | We may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites. |
Conversion Tracking Pixels | We may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service. |
Statistics | |
---|---|
Author Google Analytics | This is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy) |
Comscore | ComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy) |
Amazon Tracking Pixel | Some articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy) |
Clicksco | This is a data management platform studying reader behavior (Privacy Policy) |