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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Destin Beach Wedding

  1. Mutasim Ali profile image64
    Mutasim Aliposted 9 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Destin Beach Wedding (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    Mutasim Ali

    1. greenmind profile image97
      greenmindposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      Good idea for a hub but grammar is a problem.

      1. Mutasim Ali profile image64
        Mutasim Aliposted 9 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your response.  But it is very short, simple and most common comment. I will be helpful and grateful if the remarks are more detail.

        Thanks.
        Mutasim Ali

    2. theraggededge profile image99
      theraggededgeposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      I agree with the other hubbers. Your English is not up to the standard that HubPages requires. You have to work on your English language skills, or get someone who is fluent to rework your article.

      Edit: if you live close to this location, you need to get out there and take some decent photos. You can't promote a travel destination without photos.

      1. Mutasim Ali profile image64
        Mutasim Aliposted 9 months agoin reply to this

        Thank you for your feed back. It will be helpful to improve my write ups.

        Regards.
        Mutasim Ali

  2. julieann26 profile image89
    julieann26posted 9 months ago

    Grammar is definitely a problem.  If English is your second language then you will need to find someone who can read and write it fluently to proof-read your article.  HubPages requires articles have a high standard of English.

    There are a lot of headings that need be fixed as they are not in Title Case.  Also, there are some words you spell in two different ways e.g. Destin and Destine.

    In the section under "Awesome Destin Beach" you use the same description in both paragraphs.  Even though they are worded differently they both mean the same thing.

    Parts of your article read like they are an advertisement and might be considered spammy which will prevent your article from getting featured.

    You also need to add more photos and make sure that you own them or have permission to use them.  See if you can find some public domain images of the area you are talking if you don't have any photos of your own.

    1. Mutasim Ali profile image64
      Mutasim Aliposted 9 months agoin reply to this

      Thank you very much for your comments. You have identified my weakness specifically. So I am grateful to you.

      Regards.
      Mutasim Ali

 
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