https://hubpages.com/travel/Kamay-ni-He … hilippines It was suggested by the hubpages team that I submit my article to improving your hub forum.. thanks a lot...
Okay, I'll take a look...
I think the title could be better. No one is searching for 'another pride of the...'
There are many grammatical and spelling errors throughout the article.
'Invatation' is 'invitation'. Turn on the spell check in your browser.
Never use textspeak in a formal article 'thru' is 'through'.
Your 'officemates' are your 'coworkers' or 'co-workers', 'boss' shouldn't be capitalised mid-sentence.
930am should be 9:30 am.
I can't go through the whole article line by line, so you need someone to proofread it for you.
Too many photos clumped together and none are credited - just add your name to the source field in the photo capsule. They could also do with brightening up in a photo editor. You could set, say, three photos as the main ones, with the others as thumbnails that readers can click on to view. It's photo overload at the moment and they aren't that good. You don't need three of the same scene.
Your article has potential, but it won't make it to a niche site as it stands. Put some work into it, especially the grammar and it might be selected in due course.
You might try using an online grammar product like the one below. Or just Google "grammar checker".
You could try making your article more reader-friendly. There are some typos and spelling errors (such as "thru" instead of "through", lack of a capital letter at the beginning of sentence "the wonder of faith", the ".." at the end of the article, etc.) HubPages asks for perfect or near-perfect grammar and spelling to join WanderWisdom and the like, so cleaning those up might help your cause.
There are also many photographs bunched up together on the article. Try making some of them smaller and fitting around the text and a maximum of two large pictures between each block of text. I had to scroll for a while to get past the first group of pictures.
Try fixing these problems and then resubmit. Good luck!
Ok maybe I really need someone to proofread it for me. Thanks so much for your comments, but did I submit it to a proper network site? reading your comments made me understand this better. again thanks so much
You might try to download the grammar and spelling tool from Google. I notice a lot of misspellings. Remove some of those pictures, way too many pictures and try to balance them out with some video's from youtube but make sure they are legal to use. I do agree you need someone to proofread your article and show you the mistakes but the article is interesting. Good luck
Grammarly was recommended by Hubbers and it works well for me.
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