I'd like feedback on my hub: Best Bibs for Drooling Babies

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   MissKantiposted 7 years ago

   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub: Best Bibs for Drooling Babies. https://hubpages.com/style/best-bibs-fo … ing-babies
   
   Thanks!

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   neversaydieposted 7 years ago

   I think the article is well written and informative.  I think if it is not featuring then that may be because there are so many amazon links which make the last few paragraphs come across as a sales pitch.  Just my opinion and not one of the most experienced hubbers (wrote a couple of hubs 6 years ago and forgot about them - have now started to take it seriously and have just finished my fourth article).

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   MissKantiposted 7 years ago

   My article has two Amazon products, both directly relevant to the content. I have placed the capsules in different areas and added more content but the article is still considered spam.
   
   Thanks for your feedback.

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   Marisa Wrightposted 7 years ago

   Try putting the review of the bibs inside the Amazon capsule (in the Description section).

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   MissKantiposted 7 years ago

   Originally the review was inside the Amazon capsule, but I wasn't sure if that was enough. Recently, I read your article "How to Move From Squidoo to Hub Pages" and remember it said we must mention the product in the text. I moved my review out of the capsule and added it to the text section next to it. I'll try adding it back to the capsule.
   
   Thanks for your help.

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   ketan pandeposted 7 years ago

   It's a good article. But I think there some missing commas and repetitive words.

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   MissKantiposted 7 years ago

   After multiple edits, my article will not pass quality control. I'm sure the Amazon modules are keeping it from being featured. After every edit, I get the "spammy" e-mail from HP.

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      Robie Benveposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      There is definitely  lot of text for two amazon products. One thing to watch out is links, every outgoing link can add to spam, and I see you have the source of the photo in the text box, maybe enter that on the photo info instead. And you have links to two resources. Maybe just mention them without actually linking? Just a thought. Article looks good otherwise.
      Your Amazon capsules look different too, not sure why. I would try to delete them and re-enter using specific item codes and little descripion on the capsule title that refers to the text capsule talking about the review.
      Hope this helps.

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   MissKantiposted 7 years ago

   Hi Robie,
   
   Thank you so much for the feedback on my article. You certainly gave me some good suggestions to think about. I appreciate your help.

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