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I'd like feedback on my article: Social Comparison Exhaustion; Time to Fight...

  1. Endy Noble profile image61
    Endy Nobleposted 12 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Social Comparison Exhaustion; Time to Fight Back. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. RoadMonkey profile image82
      RoadMonkeyposted 12 days agoin reply to this

      Have you received feedback on your article from the quality assessment process? Your article is very interesting but it is difficult to read because the English is not always correct or is awkward. For instance, this sentence, "Stapel and Blanton surveyed 114 participants in a “watched as pictures flashed on a computer screen” for 110 milliseconds" should probably be written as, "Stapel and Blanton surveyed 114 participants as they watched pictures flashed on a computer screen for 110 milliseconds". There are a number of examples of this.

  2. theraggededge profile image100
    theraggededgeposted 12 days ago

    Try using the built-in bullet points on the editing toolbar, rather than pasting in your own.

    Add an extra Return between paragraphs. Remember that your article needs to look good on a phone or tablet.

    Get your article proofread by a native English speaker. Meanwhile, you can run it through Grammarly and Hemingway (both free on the web).

    Good luck.

  3. Endy Noble profile image61
    Endy Nobleposted 12 days ago

    Thanks for taking the time to read through my article. The article didn't pass the quality assessment process that is why I have to seek help for improvement. I am yet to get a feedback on how best to improve it.
    I appreciate your comment and contributions. I will make the changes as you have suggested.
    Wish I get more hints here.

    Thank you!

  4. Endy Noble profile image61
    Endy Nobleposted 12 days ago

    Thank you theraggededge.
    I will tryout your suggestions. I appreciate the time you took to read through.

 
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