I would like feedback for my Article : 12 Most Unique Buildings in the

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   Swaty Garodiaposted 4 years ago

   Hello, Hubbers,
   
   
   I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article? What can I do to improve? Thanks!
   Here is my article: http://hub.me/anAef

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      theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Your link won't work. You have to leave the automatically generated post as it is. It includes a special link which displays your article. Looks like you edited it.

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         Swaty Garodiaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Sure I have now linked it correctly. I hope it should work now.

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      OldRosesposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Your title promises 12 buldings, but your introduction says 10 buildings.  Also you don't say why you chose the buildings to feature.  Is this a list of your favorite buildings?  Or is this a list from a professional publication?  You need to make clear who says that these are the most unique buildings in the world.

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         Swaty Garodiaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

         Thank you I will make changes as suggested.

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            theraggededgeposted 4 years agoin reply to this

            No space in Iceland. Only one L in Poland

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               Swaty Garodiaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

               Thank you so much. I will surely make the changes

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   Markeliposted 4 years ago

   The link is ok now. I noticed some of the images appear quite small. Low resolution pics won't pass the Quality Assessment Process.

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   AliciaCposted 4 years ago

   There are some strange aspects to your article that you need to clarify. For example, who is “Klein” in the Basket Building Ohio capsule? You haven’t mentioned him before, so including a quote from him makes no sense. Why is the Guangzhou Circle photo and text capsule referred to as Nova Scotia South Korea? Nova Scotia is a province in Canada. What is the connection between the province and the building?
   
   Another problem is that some of your descriptions are reworded versions of passages on other sites. You need to be very careful about this. For example, most of the REN Building section is reworded information from the architect's site.
   
   You need to correct the language errors in the article. You also need to state the source of each photo and show that it has a suitable license for use on HubPages. As Markeli says, some of the photos need to be larger.

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      Swaty Garodiaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you I will make changes as suggested. smile

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   Eurofileposted 4 years ago

   I am sorry. I can't get the link to work. It takes a little perseverance to get through the QAP, but you will get there, especially if you act on the advice given by other hubbers who have been able to follow the link.

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      Swaty Garodiaposted 4 years agoin reply to this

      Thank you so much Liz

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