I would like feedback on my article.

  1. sarahspradlin profile image93
    sarahspradlinposted 8 days ago

    "how to be on time to work or school everyday"
    http://hub.me/alDma

    I will fix the pictures tomorrow. Hubpages is currently having some issues.

    1. Robie Benve profile image99
      Robie Benveposted 7 days agoin reply to this

      Nice article, full of useful tips. I'm guilty of lateness myself, and I can surely use your advice.
      Maybe some sentences could be simplified a little. I usually read the final version out loud and that helps finding ways to streamline the concepts.

 
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