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I'd like feedback on my article: A Simple Guide to Window Cleaning and...

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    stevepaul18posted 8 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article A Simple Guide to Window Cleaning and Maintenance Tips (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Carb Diva profile image97
      Carb Divaposted 8 weeks agoin reply to this

      In addition to what AliciaC has said, how is referring your audience to a cleaning service in Brisbane helpful. One would hope that your article goe world wide, not just to your local community. It might also help to have an introductory paragraph. Have you looked at the style of other hubs. Look at some of the featured hubs, how they are organized, and think about how you  might be able to use some of those techniques in your articles as well.

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    AliciaCposted 8 weeks ago

    You've linked to the same business twice and mentioned the business a third time without a link. Promotional articles aren't allowed on HubPages. In addition, in the "Clean the window shades" section, you've repeated the same three paragraphs four times.

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    stevepaul18posted 8 weeks ago

    so what can do now to publish the article

 
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