I'd like feedback on my article: Juicing Recipes And Their Health Benefits

  1. Anita Hasch profile image45
    Anita Haschposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Juicing Recipes And Their Health Benefits. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Marisa Wright profile image99
    Marisa Wrightposted 3 weeks ago

    The main problem is that you must not use ratings capsules unless you're doing a review, or a single recipe.

    Don't put a heading on your first text capsule. People have just read the title, they don't need to read another one.

    I think the problem with your recipes are that they're all too similar, so the whole article becomes too repetitive. 

    The article should say something like, "Here are a few fruit combinations that make tasty juices.  For each combo, cut the fruit into chunks, place into juicer, blend and serve."   Then you don't need to repeat those instructions again and again.

    Then, list each combination of fruits, but not one ingredient on each line.  Instead, list all the fruits for each drink on ONE line, e.g.:

    Half a small pineapple, half a papaya and one orange. 

    One cup broccoli, two carrots and two apples.

    ...and so on. Make sure you add an explanation for each drink, saying what the benefits are (if it doesn't have any benefits then perhaps it's best not to include it). Remember to hyperlink to the source to justify your statements about the benefits.

    I don't think you even need headings for each drink, and you certainly don't need a photo for every drink.

    Obviously, the result will be a much shorter Hub, but that just illustrates how lacking in real content it is.  I think you could make a lot more of the section on Aloe Vera and a lot more on the uses of pulp after juicing.

  3. Anita Hasch profile image45
    Anita Haschposted 3 weeks ago

    Thank you for your advice.

 
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